Loveliness

Lo and behold the beauty within
on gossamer wings I fly,
veiled moonlight and what it brings
eyes shining a pure green.
lonely the night when you are young and in pain
In visualising the joy of loving again
now I must flutter like a dazzled moth
evermore seeking that one person , my
soulmate somewhere waits for me, please
shine your light, so that I can see.

penned  18/2/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gentry Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 1:26 AM
Congratulations on your win! I enjoyed reading.
Roberts Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 10:19 PM
Thank you Susan.....Seren
A. Sharma Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 12:28 AM
Very well written.. big congrats on ur win Seren.
Roberts Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 10:20 PM
Hi Dr Upma. Many thx for congrats..... Seren
A   Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 1:07 PM
Seren, Congratulations on your wonderful "Loveliness-Acrostic" win. ~LINDA~
Hamilton Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 9:33 AM
Beautiful entry Seren congrats on your fine win!
Lamoureux Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 9:30 AM
This is indeed lovely.
Allison Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 12:23 PM
Absolutely beautiful Seren good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Allison Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 4:00 PM
Not been active for a couple of days:-( hugs jan xx
Roberts Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 3:48 PM
Aww Jan thx hun.missed you, you been AWOL..Serem
Turner Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 11:20 AM
Well done, Seren. A beautiful poem without the acrostic Good luck! Peace:)
Roberts Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 11:28 AM
Hi Daniel that's most kind of you....Seren
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