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Loveliness

Lo and behold the beauty within on gossamer wings I fly, veiled moonlight and what it brings eyes shining a pure green. lonely the night when you are young and in pain In visualising the joy of loving again now I must flutter like a dazzled moth evermore seeking that one person , my soulmate somewhere waits for me, please shine your light, so that I can see. penned 18/2/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/23/2016 1:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! I enjoyed reading.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/1/2016 10:19:00 PM
Thank you Susan.....Seren
Date: 2/23/2016 12:28:00 AM
Very well written.. big congrats on ur win Seren.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/1/2016 10:20:00 PM
Hi Dr Upma. Many thx for congrats..... Seren
Date: 2/22/2016 1:07:00 PM
Seren, Congratulations on your wonderful "Loveliness-Acrostic" win. ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/22/2016 9:33:00 AM
Beautiful entry Seren congrats on your fine win!
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Date: 2/22/2016 9:30:00 AM
This is indeed lovely.
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Date: 2/18/2016 12:23:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful Seren good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 2/18/2016 4:00:00 PM
Not been active for a couple of days:-( hugs jan xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/18/2016 3:48:00 PM
Aww Jan thx hun.missed you, you been AWOL..Serem
Date: 2/18/2016 11:20:00 AM
Well done, Seren. A beautiful poem without the acrostic Good luck! Peace:)
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/18/2016 11:28:00 AM
Hi Daniel that's most kind of you....Seren

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