Jan Allison Poet Acrostic

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Loveliness

Looking at your misshapen little red face,
only a mother can appreciate the beauty when seeing her
very precious baby for the first time. 
Eyes filled with happy tears as I
looked at your blonde hair and blue eyes and
inspected your tiny little fingers and toes.
Never had I seen a more beautiful child –
everything about you was simply perfect!
Soon you were sleeping peacefully,
safe in the arms of your adoring mother.

Contest: Loveliness Acrostic
Sponsor John Hamilton


submitted to Any Acrostic of 10 to 12 lines Poetry Contest
sponsored by Line Gauthier

02~15~16

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Olusegun Arowolo March 5, 2016 at 7:26 AM Lovely and beautiful,JAN...Congrats on your win... Jan Allison March 5, 2016 at 6:04 PM Thanks so much Olusegun:-) hugs Jan xx

Debra Mundine March 1, 2016 at 5:00 PM AH! Aren't they all so precious. But, she is so lovely. Jan Allison March 1, 2016 at 5:08 PM Thanks Debra:-) hugs Jan xx

Teddy Kimathi February 26, 2016 at 4:19 AM Hi buddy. Congrats for your placement in the contest!!! ;-) Jan Allison February 26, 2016 at 4:24 AM Thanks so much Teddy:-) hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma February 23, 2016 at 12:31 AM Very well written.. big congrats on ur win Jan. Jan Allison February 24, 2016 at 1:52 PM Many thanks Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx

Wendy Rycroft February 22, 2016 at 5:40 PM Congrats well written xxxx Beautiful Jan Allison February 24, 2016 at 1:53 PM Thanks so much for your support Wendy:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray February 22, 2016 at 1:29 PM Lovely baby. Lovely win. Congradulations Jan.x Jan Allison February 22, 2016 at 1:37 PM Many thanks Jean :-) hugs Jan xx

Beautiful Scars February 22, 2016 at 1:28 PM Jan, congrats on your placement!-luloo Jan Allison February 22, 2016 at 1:36 PM Many thanks Luloo:-) hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A February 22, 2016 at 1:08 PM Jan, Congratulations on your wonderful "Loveliness-Acrostic" win. ~LINDA~ Jan Allison February 22, 2016 at 1:36 PM Many thanks Linda:-) hugs Jan xx

John Hamilton February 22, 2016 at 9:59 AM So nice Jan, Thanks and congrats on your fine placement! Jan Allison February 22, 2016 at 12:13 PM Thanks so much John:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux February 22, 2016 at 9:33 AM Adorable, congrats. Jan Allison February 22, 2016 at 12:13 PM Thanks Richard:-) hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne February 21, 2016 at 8:35 AM Our children are everything. God Bless you and your family and may the universe always smile upon you all. A Big Fav! Jan Allison February 21, 2016 at 10:23 AM I agree Armand and I get so inspired by my own wonderful son - he is one of the best things to ever happen in my life:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso February 19, 2016 at 11:42 PM OK, who took me tissues! Beautiful! Jan Allison February 20, 2016 at 10:23 AM Thanks for the lovely comment - I get inspired so much by my own experiences with my son:-) hugs Jan xx

Sneha Rv February 18, 2016 at 12:42 PM This is so lovely, dear Jan!! Hope it does very well in the contest!! :D :D Jan Allison February 18, 2016 at 12:47 PM Thanks Sneha - I get very inspired by my own lovely son:-) hugs Jan xx

White Sage February 17, 2016 at 1:11 AM that's a lovely write Jan, the baby's cute...best of luck in the contest Jan Allison February 17, 2016 at 4:21 AM Not my baby just a pic from the web :-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong February 16, 2016 at 3:10 PM I can't think of anything lovlier than a new born baby. My oldest never cried, they bathed her and put her next to me in a clear bassinet and she smiled. She was content in her new surroundings. I loved your poem and the photo. I hope it is a top winner! #7 ; ) Jan Allison February 16, 2016 at 4:01 PM Thanks Connie - the picture is one off the web . I just hope John likes my take on the 'loveliness' theme:-) hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick February 16, 2016 at 3:01 PM Ahh!! Adorable child and wonderful acrostic written about the love of a mother for her child..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Jan Allison February 16, 2016 at 4:03 PM Thanks so much Sara:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen February 16, 2016 at 3:00 PM - A charming and beautiful poem, dear Jan - (7) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison February 16, 2016 at 4:03 PM Thanks so much Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper February 16, 2016 at 11:35 AM This is so touching first place for me!!!!!! Mine stinks :-( Jan Allison February 16, 2016 at 4:04 PM I don't believe that in the slightest Eve as I've read as commented on it earlier today!!:-) hugs jan xx

Beautiful Scars February 16, 2016 at 11:10 AM Jan, I love this picture! So sweet you will do well in the contest! -luloo *smiles* Jan Allison February 16, 2016 at 4:05 PM Thanks so much LuLoo:-) hugs Jan xx

Robert Lindley February 16, 2016 at 9:49 AM As always, you present such stellar work. An acrostic gem it truly is my friend! A7 Jan Allison February 16, 2016 at 4:05 PM Thanks Robert it is always a pleasure to have your comment on my work:-) hugs jan xx

Keith Bickerstaffe February 16, 2016 at 8:24 AM A beautiful ACROSTIC Jan! Such an adoring statement of the love of a mother for her child. Simply lovely! Best wishes, Keith Jan Allison February 16, 2016 at 4:00 PM I'm not sure if it counts as 'loveliness' Keith I just hope John likes my take on the theme:-) hugs jan xx

Louis Spence February 16, 2016 at 1:06 AM Condolences to Poor Peter Pumpkin BTW . Enjoyed reading it, ( good stuff) but took no joy in his demise! Thanks for reading my poem PLAYERS. Regards, Louis Jan Allison February 16, 2016 at 1:18 AM Thanks Louis:-)Glad you enjoyed Peter Pumpkin - Andrea was the real genius behind the poem I learn so much from her:-) hugs hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer February 15, 2016 at 6:27 PM a perfect poem for this topic! i hope you're at the top of the list in the contest, jan! Jan Allison February 16, 2016 at 1:16 AM Thanks Ilene I hope John likes my take on the theme:-) hugs Jan xx

David Aaron February 15, 2016 at 6:19 PM A wonderful poem. Jan Allison February 16, 2016 at 1:16 AM Thanks David:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray February 15, 2016 at 3:59 PM Aw beautiful Jan. As a midwife, I appreciate this so much, having been blessed to witness this love at first sight many times over. Jan Allison February 15, 2016 at 4:01 PM I agree Jean newborns even when they are squashed, red and wrinkled they are the most wonderful sight you can see:-) hugs Jan xx

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