Lovedrunk

neon flickers pink,
cherry blossoms broken glass——
I drank the false moon.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Hoffman Avatar
May 30, 2025 at 2:14 PM
A gorgeous haiku, Jasmine. Perfection.
Tsai Avatar
May 30, 2025 at 6:51 PM
Thank you so much for your compliment, Franci^^ I'm nee and poetry and still learning. I hope I'll get better and better!
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