Alexis Y. Poet Diminished Hexaverse

Love-Dh

I am a blank page,
   I need some color,
  On this dull paper,
   To awaken me,
  So folk can read me,

  Use a bright red,
   Use yellow too,
    Use a dark blue,
     A hint of green,

     Look at me,
      What am I?
       Do you see,

       My heart
        And deep

         Love?
          
        
        1-17-19
         Contest :Any Theme Diminished, 
         Hexaverse Poetry Contest
         Sponsor: Charles Messenia

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Bobby May February 8, 2019 at 11:44 AM Back to say Congratulations on your WIN, wonderful write my friend!

Jan Allison January 28, 2019 at 8:35 AM How descriptive Alexis may you continue to co,our soup with your wonderful words:-) many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx

Michelle Faulkner January 27, 2019 at 7:27 PM Congratulations, Alexis, well done!

Laura Leiser January 27, 2019 at 3:30 PM You know I’ve loved your poem from the beginning, Alexis! Congrats on your win! It’s first place in my book!! :) Alexis Y. January 27, 2019 at 3:36 PM Thank you so much Laura. I appreciate you telling about the typos as well. Once again thanks, I share this win with you:-) Alexis

Andrea Dietrich January 27, 2019 at 3:14 PM this is sweet and colorful! I am really enjoying this winner list! Congrats for being on it, Alexis, with this gem.

Joseph May January 27, 2019 at 12:27 PM Congrats on your win Alexis!..

Charles Messina January 27, 2019 at 9:06 AM You have colored a wonderful poem of love here, Alexis. Love it! Congratulations on your 2nd place win. Hugs Charlie :) Alexis Y. January 27, 2019 at 9:35 AM Hi Charlie, Thank you so much. You received alot of good entries for your contest. I really appreciate my placement:-) Alexis

Mahtab Bangalee January 20, 2019 at 9:26 PM beautiful hexaverse poem on love theme // I enjoyed

Nette Onclaud January 18, 2019 at 11:27 AM wonderful burst of hues... i enjoyed this lovely piece, alexis...huggs Alexis Y. January 20, 2019 at 1:28 AM Hi Nette, I always enjoy your awesome comments and visits:-) Alexis

Bobby May January 18, 2019 at 9:57 AM I believe those colors make black, I could be wrong I was wrong once, lol GREAT poem my friend! That's amazing my friend black ink on a blank page showing your love through your words a FAV Alexis Y. January 18, 2019 at 11:43 AM Hi Bobby, Thanks for the awesome comment and for faving my poem. I really appreciate your continued support:-)Alexis

Jennifer Proxenos January 18, 2019 at 9:04 AM Hi Alexis, colours - I love colours, I have a poetry corner which has every colour imaginable placed somewhere within it. Really enjoyed your poem and the medley of colours you mixed in it! Well penned! Poetry hugs, Jennifer. Alexis Y. January 20, 2019 at 1:27 AM Hi Jennifer, I'm happy you enjoyed it. I love colors! I appreciate that you stopped by:-) Alexis

Joseph May January 18, 2019 at 8:00 AM Beautiful poem Alexis.. Alexis Y. January 20, 2019 at 1:25 AM Hi Joseph, Thank you very much. Thanks for stopping by:-) Alexis

Tom Cunningham January 18, 2019 at 1:48 AM Never heard of this form, you've written it well Alexis. Good luck. Tom. Alexis Y. January 20, 2019 at 1:23 AM Hi Tom, I just found out about it too! I appreciate your awesome comment and continued support:-) Alexis

Arthur Vaso January 17, 2019 at 11:30 PM I often feel like a blank page that will always remain so, nice poem! Alexis Y. January 20, 2019 at 1:21 AM I couldn't imagine you feeling like a blank page. I'm so happy that you stopped by:-) Alexis

Caren Krutsinger January 17, 2019 at 9:49 PM Lovely diminished hexaverse, Alexis, one of my favorite topics: colors! I added it to my FAV list. Alexis Y. January 17, 2019 at 10:30 PM Hi Caren, Colors brighten up our dull word.I appreciate that you stopped by:-)Alexis

Laura Leiser January 17, 2019 at 9:35 PM Very creative, Alexis! Check line 4..has 6 syllables instead of 5. Otherwise, fantastic hexaverse! GL in the contest! :) Alexis Y. January 17, 2019 at 9:46 PM Hi Laura, Thank you very much. I fixed line 4. I appreciate that you stopped by:-) Alexis