Love You, Forever

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I thought our love would last, forever; now, you lay in a place vast, forever. From the moment we met it was to be; with a love growing fast and, forever. Remember how we would go on picnics; making a green grassed dream for, forever. Oh, what a divine wedding in the snow; now that beauty is the past, forever. Dark death cannot break this sweet chain of love; will love you till I have passed, forever. _______________________________ April 16, 2019

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/23/2019 11:14:00 AM

Beautiful memories help to dull the pain of loss a little. This is lovely Constance. A great example for your contest. xxoo

Constance La France
Date: 4/24/2019 8:20:00 AM

Connie, thanks for the comment and the compliment !

Manmath Dalei

Date: 4/18/2019 8:24:00 PM

Love gives a divine feeling and you describe it brilliantly. A7 from me. Hugs...........//Manmath//

Constance La France
Date: 4/21/2019 8:03:00 AM

Manmath, thanks so much for the nice comment and the A7 !

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/18/2019 12:43:00 PM

A dear, enchanting poem of everlasting love - a love forever - eternally! A heartfelt poem Dear Heart. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Constance La France
Date: 4/18/2019 2:58:00 PM

Jennifer, thank you for visiting my poem and for the nice comment and hugs ~

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/17/2019 1:07:00 PM

- The memories will always be with you in your heart :) - I wish you a wonderful Easter, D.H. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France
Date: 4/18/2019 2:59:00 PM

Anne-Lise, thanks so much for the nice comment and hugs and hope you have a great Easter too!

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 4/17/2019 12:18:00 AM

Very sad as loss always is. Fine pen

Constance La France
Date: 4/17/2019 9:48:00 AM

Allen, thanks for visiting my poem and for the compassion, appreciate ~

Constance La France

Date: 4/16/2019 2:27:00 PM

Ghazal, definition, a poetic form consisting of couplets which share a rhyme and a refrain. I have written 5 couplets to equal 10 lines, each line is 10 syllables. The refrain can be a word or a phrase, mine is the word forever. There is internal rhyming in line 1 and 2, and line 2 of each couplet with the refrain. You will need 6 rhyming words. Mine are last, vast, fast, grassed, past, passed. Each couplet should be able to stand alone. There can be many couplets but mine is 5 only.