Constance La France Poet Ghazal

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Love You, Forever

I thought our love would last, forever;
now, you lay in a place vast, forever.

From the moment we met it was to be;
with a love growing fast and, forever.

Remember how we would go on picnics;
making a green grassed dream for, forever.

Oh, what a divine wedding in the snow;
now that beauty is the past, forever.

Dark death cannot break this sweet chain of love;
will love you till I have passed, forever.

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April 16, 2019

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Connie Marcum Wong April 23, 2019 at 11:14 AM Beautiful memories help to dull the pain of loss a little. This is lovely Constance. A great example for your contest. xxoo Constance La France April 24, 2019 at 8:20 AM Connie, thanks for the comment and the compliment !

Manmath Dalei April 18, 2019 at 8:24 PM Love gives a divine feeling and you describe it brilliantly. A7 from me. Hugs...........//Manmath// Constance La France April 21, 2019 at 8:03 AM Manmath, thanks so much for the nice comment and the A7 !

Jennifer Proxenos April 18, 2019 at 12:43 PM A dear, enchanting poem of everlasting love - a love forever - eternally! A heartfelt poem Dear Heart. Poetry hugs, Jennifer. Constance La France April 18, 2019 at 2:58 PM Jennifer, thank you for visiting my poem and for the nice comment and hugs ~

Anne-Lise Andresen April 17, 2019 at 1:07 PM - The memories will always be with you in your heart :) - I wish you a wonderful Easter, D.H. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Constance La France April 18, 2019 at 2:59 PM Anne-Lise, thanks so much for the nice comment and hugs and hope you have a great Easter too!

Allen Beilschmidt Sr. April 17, 2019 at 12:18 AM Very sad as loss always is. Fine pen Constance La France April 17, 2019 at 9:48 AM Allen, thanks for visiting my poem and for the compassion, appreciate ~

Constance La France April 16, 2019 at 2:27 PM Ghazal, definition, a poetic form consisting of couplets which share a rhyme and a refrain. I have written 5 couplets to equal 10 lines, each line is 10 syllables. The refrain can be a word or a phrase, mine is the word forever. There is internal rhyming in line 1 and 2, and line 2 of each couplet with the refrain. You will need 6 rhyming words. Mine are last, vast, fast, grassed, past, passed. Each couplet should be able to stand alone. There can be many couplets but mine is 5 only.