Love X

Your voice is spoken,
Soft and gentle,
But the words you say,
Drive me mental.

Mental with love,
It drives me crazy,
Your words so beautiful,
Like a daisy.

You said to me once,
That you would run away,
But only if,
I found you again,

These words so great,
My cheeks blush pink,
Then you walk away,
And leave me to think,

I am sure that I know,
That love is so true,
But only when were close,
When I am with you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 3:20 PM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round Vicki.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
Jordan Avatar
August 3, 2009 at 7:58 PM
Vicki a very beautiful love poem - congratulations on being featured - God Bless, MJ
Pickett Avatar
August 3, 2009 at 12:58 PM
Love is a beautiful thing, as is this poem.....GREAT write..........:JP]
Brown Avatar
August 3, 2009 at 12:06 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being selected to be featured this week . Love, Carol
Fraser Avatar
August 3, 2009 at 4:34 AM
Congratulations on being featured>>James
Moreno Avatar
April 14, 2009 at 3:14 PM
Nice work Vicki and welcome to poetry soup.
Shahwan Avatar
April 13, 2009 at 3:46 PM
Beautiful.
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