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Love Without Hope

Love without hope, just how I seem to live
Sunken won't float, but now I dream you give
A purpose to life, no longer on my own
I propose my wife, we're stronger than alone.

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Poet Destroyer A

April 6, 2016 at 11:44 PM

John-O.,, Congrats on your "Love Without Hope" win ... LINDA

John-Ovan.P. Hull

April 15, 2016 at 9:13 AM

Thanks a lot Linda, although after re-reading it, I see I let a little hope sneak through, so it should have been disqualified really!

Teddy Kimathi

April 4, 2016 at 4:19 AM

Congrats John,for your placement with this fine verse!!! ;-)

John-Ovan.P. Hull

April 6, 2016 at 5:49 PM

Cheers Teddy, it was quite a challenge to stick to one verse because I usually waffle for a lot more lines.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

April 2, 2016 at 1:39 AM

Congrats on great win with this lovely write John..

John-Ovan.P. Hull

April 6, 2016 at 5:48 PM

Thankyou again for humbling me with such kind words. X

Sara Kendrick

April 1, 2016 at 3:48 PM

Your poem was awesome, creative and unique. You did a wonderful job with the topic “Love Without Hope” ..Congratulations on your placement..Sara

John-Ovan.P. Hull

April 6, 2016 at 5:47 PM

Thanks for the placement and setting up the contest in the first place, although I did slightly deviate from the topic, but I was in one of those rare hopefully moods.