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Love Without Hope

Love without hope, just how I seem to live Sunken won't float, but now I dream you give A purpose to life, no longer on my own I propose my wife, we're stronger than alone.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/6/2016 11:44:00 PM

John-O.,, Congrats on your "Love Without Hope" win ... LINDA

John-Ovan.P. Hull
Date: 4/15/2016 9:13:00 AM

Thanks a lot Linda, although after re-reading it, I see I let a little hope sneak through, so it should have been disqualified really!

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 4/4/2016 4:19:00 AM

Congrats John,for your placement with this fine verse!!! ;-)

John-Ovan.P. Hull
Date: 4/6/2016 5:49:00 PM

Cheers Teddy, it was quite a challenge to stick to one verse because I usually waffle for a lot more lines.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/2/2016 1:39:00 AM

Congrats on great win with this lovely write John..

John-Ovan.P. Hull
Date: 4/6/2016 5:48:00 PM

Thankyou again for humbling me with such kind words. X

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/1/2016 3:48:00 PM

Your poem was awesome, creative and unique. You did a wonderful job with the topic “Love Without Hope” ..Congratulations on your placement..Sara

John-Ovan.P. Hull
Date: 4/6/2016 5:47:00 PM

Thanks for the placement and setting up the contest in the first place, although I did slightly deviate from the topic, but I was in one of those rare hopefully moods.

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 4/1/2016 7:53:00 AM

This is so brilliant John-Ovan! Truly a great work! Congratulations! I hope I'll furthermore see beautiful works like this! :) -HANS

John-Ovan.P. Hull
Date: 4/6/2016 5:45:00 PM

Thanks for the kindness Hans, I hope you'll see a bit more of this too.

Red Fiery

Date: 3/26/2016 12:04:00 PM

Hey Johny ! This is awesome...the last line was very deep..u said so much in just few lines...simply beautiful !

John-Ovan.P. Hull
Date: 3/26/2016 7:45:00 PM

Thanks, and I was pleased to read that comment because the contest setter had mentioned it was quite difficult to pack a lot into 4 lines.