Winged Warrior Poet Rhyme

Love Without Hope

In the cosmic consciousness thru the pillars of esoteric endless time
The Angelic realm is worried that mans love will soon cease to rhyme
What is love without hope but a void in the vastness of our malignant mind
The Angels silently scurry to find a cure thru the vortex of Nebulous Prime.


March.24.2016
For Contest-"Love Without Hope" 
By Sara Kendrick

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Funom Makama May 26, 2016 at 1:52 PM Great lines, wonderful flows, indicative of a soul deep mind. An excellent seven well deserved. Winged Warrior May 26, 2016 at 1:55 PM Thank you Funom my friend...always nice to hear from you...god bless...WW

Lin Lane April 7, 2016 at 9:01 AM Forgive my not commenting sooner. I've been out of town and leaving again today for another trip. I just wanted to tell you the scope of this rhyme is an infinite as the range of the "Nebulous" universe. ;) Winged Warrior April 7, 2016 at 10:31 AM No forgiveness necessary my dear Lady Lin...and thank you for your cosmically kind words...off to worldly ventures I see...good day and good luck...god bless...^WW^

Poet Destroyer A April 6, 2016 at 11:31 PM Winged, Congrats on your "Love Without Hope" win ... LINDA Winged Warrior April 7, 2016 at 12:06 AM Thank you so much Linda...god bless...^WW^

Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 2, 2016 at 12:31 AM Congrats on great win with this lovely write Warrior.. Winged Warrior April 2, 2016 at 9:07 AM Thank you Dr. Upma...hope everything is O.K...god bless...^WW^

Eve Roper April 1, 2016 at 5:52 PM Great write, WW!!!!! Congratulations on your win !! Winged Warrior April 1, 2016 at 5:59 PM Thank you Eve...one day we shall all visit Nebulous Prime lol...god bless...^WW^

Jan Allison April 1, 2016 at 5:42 PM I thought of star trek when I read your rhyme ^WW^ congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Winged Warrior April 1, 2016 at 6:01 PM No # 1...Engage!!!... Jan Allison April 1, 2016 at 5:58 PM I really loved the original star trek and also next generation:-) hugs Jan xx Winged Warrior April 1, 2016 at 5:57 PM Thank you dear Jan...you're quite right...used to be a big fan...not so much now...but that show taught us a lot...god bless...^WW^

Sara Kendrick April 1, 2016 at 8:10 AM Your poem was awesome, creative and unique. You did a wonderful job with the topic “Love Without Hope” ..Congratulations on your placement..Sara Winged Warrior April 1, 2016 at 8:42 AM Thank you my dear Sara...for you kind comment...I agree...I've should have at least placed between 1'st and 2'nd place lol...god bless...^WW^

Hansteven Selfa April 1, 2016 at 7:48 AM This is so brilliant Winged Warrior! Truly a great work! Congratulations! I hope I'll furthermore see beautiful works like this! :) -HANS Winged Warrior April 1, 2016 at 8:35 AM Thank you my friend Hansteven...and there will be more...first I must go to Nebulous Prime lol...god bless...^WW^

Timothy Hicks March 28, 2016 at 1:39 AM Wow, WW, excellent four lines! Very celestial and thought-provoking especially the second and third lines. Hope this does well in the contest! Winged Warrior March 28, 2016 at 7:00 AM Thank my dear friend Timothy...I used to watch a lot of Star Trek..."Engage..."...god bless...^WW^

Cortney Bartholomew March 26, 2016 at 12:01 PM Love this,,,,your writing is absolutely beautiful! Winged Warrior March 26, 2016 at 1:17 PM Thank you dear Cortney...as are you and the Angels...god bless...^WW^

Andrea Dietrich March 24, 2016 at 6:16 PM I really loved the sound and idea of that third line, it's so true. Sure to do well in Sara's contest. Winged Warrior March 24, 2016 at 7:52 PM Thank you my dear friend...god bless and Happy Easter...^WW^

Walter T. Ashe March 24, 2016 at 12:47 PM "love without hope".....a scary void! The best in this contest ^WW^....a cosmically felt write! Winged Warrior March 24, 2016 at 5:19 PM Thank you my dear friend Walter...thank god we have hope...god bless...^WW^

Constance La France March 24, 2016 at 12:40 PM Winged, nicely done for the contest, I want to try this contest also, I am loving this 7 ~ Winged Warrior March 24, 2016 at 5:17 PM Thanks Wings...can't wait to read it...god bless...^WW^

Charlie Smith March 24, 2016 at 10:09 AM "Love soon cease to rhyme", love that. Well wishes, Charlie Winged Warrior March 24, 2016 at 10:29 AM Thank you dear friend...god bless...^WW^