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Love Weaving Harmony As Flowers In Wreath

Wreath ring of flowers holding hand-in-hand
Hands in circular unity symbolising eternity 
Eternal is belief in Trinity, Christianity and Christ
Christ a Messiah rising from dead absolving sins

Sins mounting, hoping Christ to descend from Heaven 
Heaven like atmosphere humans creating in Christmas
Christmas, festive season of family reunion and gift-giving  
Gift-giving, symbolic love weaving harmony as flowers in wreath 

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© Hitendra Mehta  
( Entry for Members Contest - Christmas Wreath sponsored by Dr Ram Mehta)

Copyright © Dr Hitendra Mehta | Year Posted 2010

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Nette Onclaud Date: 1/6/2011 1:12:00 AM an unusual, lovely style this is, hitendra... KUDOS for the win..;) nette Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/5/2011 4:41:00 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 1/5/2011 9:47:00 AM Congratulations on your win Hitendra in the "Christmas Wreath" contest by Dr. Ram Mehta. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Eamon Duffin Date: 1/5/2011 8:16:00 AM Hi . Heartiest congratulations on your success with this fine piece. Love the way you kept the true meaning of Christmas within those words. Eamon Login to Reply

Daniel Cwiak Date: 1/5/2011 6:16:00 AM Wonderful write, Hitendra. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/3/2011 9:44:00 PM wow, you did a great job with this challenge, Hitendra. Congratulations!! Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 1/3/2011 7:12:00 PM You did a great job in weaving your wreath of words for this difficult form. Congratulaions. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 1/3/2011 5:32:00 PM Hitendra, unity symbolising eternity is a lovely way to describe the wreath's place. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored place in the contest. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 1/3/2011 5:32:00 PM Such a meaningful and spiritual poem, Hitendra. Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 1/3/2011 4:03:00 PM Congrats Hitendra on your winning poem in Dr. Ram's wreath contest with this lovely entry my friend.. enjoy your top ten success tonight with luv.. Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 1/3/2011 3:37:00 PM Congratulations, Hitendra, on the eighth place win in my contest. Login to Reply

Lonnell George Date: 12/17/2010 6:14:00 PM very nice..poetry is great.... Login to Reply

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet Date: 12/5/2010 12:36:00 PM Thank-you so much Hitendra for the HM and for your very nice and kind comment you sent.Your words say Christmas wreath for me.Your friend Teresa Login to Reply