Dr Hitendra Mehta Poet Free verse

Love Weaving Harmony As Flowers In Wreath

Wreath ring of flowers holding hand-in-hand
Hands in circular unity symbolising eternity 
Eternal is belief in Trinity, Christianity and Christ
Christ a Messiah rising from dead absolving sins

Sins mounting, hoping Christ to descend from Heaven 
Heaven like atmosphere humans creating in Christmas
Christmas, festive season of family reunion and gift-giving  
Gift-giving, symbolic love weaving harmony as flowers in wreath 

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© Hitendra Mehta  
( Entry for Members Contest - Christmas Wreath sponsored by Dr Ram Mehta)

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Nette Onclaud January 6, 2011 at 1:12 AM an unusual, lovely style this is, hitendra... KUDOS for the win..;) nette

Sara Kendrick January 5, 2011 at 4:41 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown January 5, 2011 at 9:47 AM Congratulations on your win Hitendra in the "Christmas Wreath" contest by Dr. Ram Mehta. Love, Carol

Eamon Duffin January 5, 2011 at 8:16 AM Hi . Heartiest congratulations on your success with this fine piece. Love the way you kept the true meaning of Christmas within those words. Eamon

Daniel Cwiak January 5, 2011 at 6:16 AM Wonderful write, Hitendra. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

Andrea Dietrich January 3, 2011 at 9:44 PM wow, you did a great job with this challenge, Hitendra. Congratulations!!

Joyce Johnson January 3, 2011 at 7:12 PM You did a great job in weaving your wreath of words for this difficult form. Congratulaions. Love, Joyce

Carolyn Devonshire January 3, 2011 at 5:32 PM Such a meaningful and spiritual poem, Hitendra. Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest! Love, Carolyn

John Freeman January 3, 2011 at 5:32 PM Hitendra, unity symbolising eternity is a lovely way to describe the wreath's place. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored place in the contest. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 3, 2011 at 4:03 PM Congrats Hitendra on your winning poem in Dr. Ram's wreath contest with this lovely entry my friend.. enjoy your top ten success tonight with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta January 3, 2011 at 3:37 PM Congratulations, Hitendra, on the eighth place win in my contest.

Lonnell George December 17, 2010 at 6:14 PM very nice..poetry is great....

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet December 5, 2010 at 12:36 PM Thank-you so much Hitendra for the HM and for your very nice and kind comment you sent.Your words say Christmas wreath for me.Your friend Teresa