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Love Weaves a Mysterious Magic Spell

From a realm of self-absorption, quite exclusive
The reason for this feeling inside me was illusive.
Unconsciously putting his welfare before my own.
I am realising this fondness for him has grown.

Is love the course I felt like my heart would burst?
It seemed to be suddenly his feelings came first.
Previously the only one to care about was me.
This feeling of love inside me, makes me happy.

This "love weaves a mysterious magic spell".
When it began, I am sure I don’t know. I can’t tell.
Did it begin when first he took my hand to hold?
Or when he wrapped his coat round me, I was cold.
 
I am not sure just when this spell overcame me.
When my directions got us lost, he didn’t blame me. 
Could it have been the first time we tenderly kissed.
Hope this feeling never leaves, it would be missed.

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Date: 8/13/2023 8:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/picture. I enjoyed it. Have a great day.............
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Date: 8/13/2023 7:34:00 AM
Very nicely penned, Congrats on your win
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Date: 7/17/2023 5:43:00 PM
What ardent feelings of love here! When love overpowers us, we do not know what all changes take place in us. Priorities shift and we tend to place the other's interest first and the self dies. This wonderful transformation is beautifully delineated here. All the best dear friend.
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Date: 7/17/2023 7:06:00 PM
Oh Valsa when fine poets like you tell me they like my work it is such a compliment. I like this one too. thank you my friend.
Date: 7/16/2023 12:13:00 PM
Nice poem. GL in contest.
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Date: 7/16/2023 5:38:00 PM
Thank you Jay. Best wishes from me.
Date: 7/15/2023 7:11:00 PM
"I am not sure just when this spell overcame me. When my directions got us lost, he didn’t blame me. Could it have been the first time we tenderly kissed. Hope this feeling never leaves, it would be missed." -- beautiful write. Love it!
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Date: 7/15/2023 7:20:00 PM
Thank you Joe, I shall start reading yours from now on. I am sure I have some wonderful reading ahead. It is hard to pinpoint the moment that fondness turns to love. That's with a partner. With a child it's immediate. Bless you Joe ... SV
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