Love waits patiently

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Oh my beloved, this life can be confusing. A plethora of recycled emotions, sometimes result in false devotions. Absence wounds with nostalgic reflections. Secluded souls yearning for old satisfactions. Oh my sweetheart, sometimes we feel like trees in Autumn, exposed to the harshness of an apathetic Winter. We battle the storms, remaining defiant until Spring. Virgin petals bloom among protective thorns in Summer. Only a true lover knows how to cultivate in the garden of love. Oh my darling, you remain hidden behind stubborn veils and even though I'm deprived of such pleasures, patiently my eyes wait for one glimpse of heaven. The stars are no substitute to illuminate my desires. The moon lacks mystery in comparison to your elegance. Oh my lover, my lips yearn to taste forbidden nectar. My heart envies those who breathe upon you. My hands seem empty without a hand to hold My eyes disinterested by this monotonous existence. My speech disillusioned with oxymoron contradictions. A sad soul searches among an abundance of cherry blossom trees, to unite with a unique rose resembling a titanium chrysalis. Upon this path of desperation, a true heart has no fear, life is a trial with many an adversity, the one who prevails, is the victor.
Silent One Written 17 April 2016 Simple Musings

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Date: 2/27/2018 6:05:00 PM
Great use of images, Silent One. I was very taken by the pattern of this. but I see it's simply narration. Anyway, I like how each stanza extends the lines one by one!
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Date: 2/27/2018 2:23:00 PM
Wow a awesome piece. love phyl
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Date: 2/20/2018 1:18:00 AM
I started the day with reading your poem. A message from patience which spoke to me in a different context. I cannot procrastinate any longer now and have to start writing. Patience is good, but my fingers and brain have to start working. Thank you, Kai
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Date: 2/19/2018 2:01:00 PM
Helllo Silent One,yes these words in your poem are so true. I like verses One , two, three and four. these verses speaks to me. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 2/17/2018 9:38:00 PM
Victor...yes again those who dares find true love but one who dares defy all the man made limitations. Only a poet can break it. You just do it with your marvelous words. :) Sunita
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Date: 2/14/2018 10:53:00 AM
Another sterling romantic gem, SO. What can be more lasting than a titanium chrysalis? Beautiful linguistic gardening, my talented friend. Such a powerful ink potion of elixir love. Wonderful prose poetry. Love and smiles forever.
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Silent One
Date: 2/14/2018 3:54:00 PM
The important thing is to heal the titanium chrysalis so it soften and becomes flesh.. thank you Freddie..
Date: 2/14/2018 10:42:00 AM
Oooh! So nice it is..
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Silent One
Date: 2/14/2018 3:54:00 PM
Thank you..
Date: 2/14/2018 9:40:00 AM
And that, dear Silent One, is Love in all its forms, amongst which, beautiful phrasing set in subtle language, delicacy and sincerity. Sighhh.
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Silent One
Date: 2/14/2018 3:57:00 PM
Thank you Emma..
Date: 2/14/2018 7:33:00 AM
You've saved the most romantic for Valentine's Day :) Amazingly, beautiful poem Silent One!
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Silent One
Date: 2/14/2018 4:00:00 PM
Thank you Judy..
Date: 2/14/2018 7:23:00 AM
Wow - beautiful feelings and exquisite form.
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Silent One
Date: 2/14/2018 4:00:00 PM
Thank you Line..
Date: 2/14/2018 7:19:00 AM
A beautiful tribute to Valentines Day. 'Faint heart never won Fair Lady'...'a true heart has no fear, life is a trial with many an adversity, the one who prevails, is the victor.'..I do trust that his courage prevailed enough to win his Lady Love. A passionate poem indeed and a fave for me. Happy Valentine's Day....Maria
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Silent One
Date: 2/14/2018 4:01:00 PM
You are right Maria.. Thank you..
Date: 2/14/2018 7:04:00 AM
The heart dictates, the lips pronounce, the hand writes sweet expressions of love for the beloved! You are young my friend, S.O. more to come...wonderfully romantic!
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Date: 2/14/2018 4:01:00 PM
Thank you my friend..
Date: 2/14/2018 6:47:00 AM
A passionate depiction of love, waiting in admiration..emotions flow throughout. Waiting for your new posting..celebrating the day, Silent One!
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Silent One
Date: 2/14/2018 4:08:00 PM
Thank you Vijay..
Date: 2/14/2018 6:17:00 AM
This is less than a year old, still a fetus in the classic annuls of poetry. Effective graphic presentation. Your words are convicting-ly, passionate. Great for Valentine's Day. Happy Day.
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Silent One
Date: 2/14/2018 4:09:00 PM
Thank you poet...
Date: 2/14/2018 5:48:00 AM
Love this beautiful poem. ""A sad soul searches among an abundance of cherry blossom trees,"" ""Upon this path of desperation, a true heart has no fear,"" How well I know both those verses and how they make a person feel.. Pure and top class poetry my friend.. A fav...
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Silent One
Date: 2/14/2018 4:13:00 PM
Thank you Robert..
Date: 2/14/2018 5:16:00 AM
So perfect for today,and excellent track to accompany it. Regards Tom
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Silent One
Date: 2/14/2018 4:24:00 PM
Thank you Tom..
Date: 2/14/2018 4:56:00 AM
Inspired a senryu!
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Silent One
Date: 2/14/2018 4:14:00 PM
Thanks..
Date: 2/14/2018 4:47:00 AM
Keep it coming...I like the love vibes...A lovely way to muse indeed...
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Silent One
Date: 2/14/2018 4:49:00 AM
Thanks for your continued support Arturo.. I will write a simple musing, just need to get round to it lol
Date: 2/14/2018 4:41:00 AM
Be a cavalier and call her "my better half" in the last stanza :) Loved your simple musings.
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Silent One
Date: 2/14/2018 4:49:00 AM
Thank you Victor, this is an old poem.. Will post a new one later..