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Love Train Haiku

ATTRACTION,,,,,

                    Eyes glued to body,
                    Roaming from head to toe,
                    Drooling mouth water...

FIRST LOVE,,,,,,
                    
                    A sudden attack,
                    Swept off your feet,
                    Above cloud nine...

IN LOVE,,,,,,,,,,,

                    Communication amazing,
                    Thoughts wave connect,
                     Heart beating as one...
   

               My first HAIKU

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/13/2017 8:17:00 PM
Beautifully done Richard, great imagery throughout. Enjoyed reading your poetry this evening!
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Richard Palmer
Date: 9/14/2017 7:44:00 PM
thanks Susan,enjoyed reading yours as well
Date: 7/15/2016 10:11:00 AM
Nice
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Richard Palmer
Date: 9/14/2017 7:43:00 PM
thanks Amanda,,,been busy taking care of life but i'm back,check out my new poem
Date: 6/21/2014 4:28:00 PM
Wonderful first haiku Richard they flow so well together. Hugs jan xxx
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/26/2014 8:06:00 AM
thanks much Jadazzle,oxox
Date: 5/19/2014 4:46:00 PM
Can I have a ride on this love train, Richard.... Enjoyed stopping by:) Love ~SKAT~
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Richard Palmer
Date: 5/20/2014 1:25:00 PM
hop aboard girl,enjoy the ride,,,thanks Skat oxox
Date: 7/8/2013 9:02:00 PM
Great, Richard. I enjoyed this.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 10/31/2013 1:32:00 PM
happy you did,thanks Sherese
Date: 6/1/2013 9:07:00 PM
Richard, congratulations on having your poem Featured this past week. It was nice reading your poem tonight. Goodnight~ Linda
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Richard Palmer
Date: 10/31/2013 1:31:00 PM
thanks Linda a.k.a Poet A oxox
Date: 5/13/2013 2:08:00 AM
Hey, nice structuring. Lusty kind of haiku - senryu? Keep riding that train!
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/6/2013 8:31:00 AM
toot toot,lol I will Michael thanks much
Date: 5/6/2013 8:25:00 AM
he he.. so fantastic <3
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/6/2013 8:30:00 AM
thanks S.K oxox
Date: 1/22/2013 12:23:00 PM
Amazing Haikos -very impressive. Thanks for your appreciation of my Senryu Love, Richard -Mohammad
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Richard Palmer
Date: 1/24/2013 8:26:00 PM
thank you Mohammad,you are welcome
Date: 1/13/2013 1:31:00 AM
This is awesome....describes the initial attraction to true love perfectly in so few words.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 1/13/2013 5:26:00 AM
thank you Juanita,try my best
Date: 1/10/2013 7:04:00 AM
Keep them going - if these are your first attempts there is promise for you... one small hint is with the last one, just do a recount of first line...? Not an expert but I do try them myself, so hope it helps.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 1/10/2013 12:22:00 PM
thanks Anna,happy you enjoyed,gonna try a few more getting the knack of it lol
Date: 1/10/2013 12:01:00 AM
Greetings. I found these vivid and engaging. Particularly the first. I could just see the drool! lol Love Haiku.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 1/10/2013 4:44:00 AM
thanks Mari,someone needs a dribbler lol
Date: 1/7/2013 5:21:00 AM
Richard, my friend, As you may know, I had a bad case of Haiku fever awhile back and can speak with some authority on the subject. Once started they are persistant little devils. and can really get under your skin. Now you can trap them and if you get enough of them, cook them up..... They go great with beer...... great Job..... Jake
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Richard Palmer
Date: 1/8/2013 6:27:00 AM
thank you very much John,you get the beers,I will do the cooking lol
Date: 1/2/2013 6:40:00 PM
Really like the three steps. Think that happens to a lot of people. But what happens when we fall out of love? A follow up haiku perhaps?
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Richard Palmer
Date: 1/2/2013 7:36:00 PM
ok gonna give it a shot,thanks Frank
Date: 1/2/2013 8:56:00 AM
I love Haiku, Richard. Keep writing them. And thanks for reading my stuff. Love, daver
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Richard Palmer
Date: 1/2/2013 9:38:00 AM
THANK YOU Daver,you are welcome
Date: 1/2/2013 12:27:00 AM
Well I like these well enough,,, I wrote a few myself... Happy New Year Richard ;}
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Richard Palmer
Date: 1/2/2013 5:13:00 AM
happy new year Debbie,thank you oxox
Date: 1/1/2013 12:03:00 PM
Hello Richard, , making an appearance on the soup today. Only 2 wish you this coming year to be a glorious one in which rewards all your future poetry with success. I love the time I took out of the first day of the year. 1-1-2013* :-) Just to wish you the best of 2013. Take care my dear poet friend. Thank you for sharing the love train haiku..love them. ~xox~LINDA
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Richard Palmer
Date: 1/2/2013 5:12:00 AM
thank you very much Linda,wishing you the greatest 2013 gift LOVE AND MORE LOVE,have a wonderful year oxox
Date: 12/29/2012 1:58:00 PM
This is really good, I love it
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Richard Palmer
Date: 12/30/2012 5:08:00 AM
thank you Briana
Date: 12/29/2012 7:41:00 AM
HAPPY NEW YEAR 2013,RICHARD !!!!!!! / / oxox Anne-Lise :)
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Richard Palmer
Date: 12/30/2012 5:02:00 AM
thank you very much Anne,same to you,oxox
Date: 12/29/2012 6:21:00 AM
Richard, i appreciate your stopping by, somehow they are granted, nice one too it feels like first love too.. hmm!- Lucas-
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Richard Palmer
Date: 12/29/2012 6:58:00 AM
thanks Lucas,lol
Date: 12/29/2012 5:50:00 AM
Hey Richard...thank you so much for your stopping by,,, and appreciate so very much your nice comment... wishing you have a blessed new year...Happy New Year ...<3
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Richard Palmer
Date: 12/29/2012 5:58:00 AM
you are welcome SK,same to you oxox for the new year
Date: 12/24/2012 9:57:00 AM
Great job!
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Richard Palmer
Date: 12/24/2012 2:34:00 PM
thanks Susan,but I think it needs a little work
Date: 12/23/2012 6:36:00 PM
Merry Christmas and belated birthday Richard.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 12/23/2012 8:06:00 PM
thank you very much Richard
Date: 12/23/2012 5:35:00 AM
A little Christmas visit to you Richard. <3 Hope your Christmas will be peaceful and nice!! Sending you a big, warm Christmas hug !!! - MERRY CHRISTMAS - // Anne-Lise :)
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Richard Palmer
Date: 12/23/2012 1:07:00 PM
Merry Christmas to you too Anne,warm oxox,fulljoy your holidays
Date: 12/22/2012 1:12:00 PM
I like it! Thanks for your comments. :) $honie
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Richard Palmer
Date: 12/22/2012 2:37:00 PM
thank you Shonie,you are welcome
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