Richard Palmer Poet Haiku

Love Train Haiku

ATTRACTION,,,,,

                    Eyes glued to body,
                    Roaming from head to toe,
                    Drooling mouth water...

FIRST LOVE,,,,,,
                    
                    A sudden attack,
                    Swept off your feet,
                    Above cloud nine...

IN LOVE,,,,,,,,,,,

                    Communication amazing,
                    Thoughts wave connect,
                     Heart beating as one...
   

               My first HAIKU

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Susan Ashley September 13, 2017 at 8:17 PM Beautifully done Richard, great imagery throughout. Enjoyed reading your poetry this evening! Richard Palmer September 14, 2017 at 7:44 PM thanks Susan,enjoyed reading yours as well

Amanda Mawu July 15, 2016 at 10:11 AM Nice Richard Palmer September 14, 2017 at 7:43 PM thanks Amanda,,,been busy taking care of life but i'm back,check out my new poem

Jadazzle United June 21, 2014 at 4:28 PM Wonderful first haiku Richard they flow so well together. Hugs jan xxx Richard Palmer June 26, 2014 at 8:06 AM thanks much Jadazzle,oxox

Skat A May 19, 2014 at 4:46 PM Can I have a ride on this love train, Richard.... Enjoyed stopping by:) Love ~SKAT~ Richard Palmer May 20, 2014 at 1:25 PM hop aboard girl,enjoy the ride,,,thanks Skat oxox

Sherese Gooden July 8, 2013 at 9:02 PM Great, Richard. I enjoyed this. Richard Palmer October 31, 2013 at 1:32 PM happy you did,thanks Sherese

Poet Destroyer A June 1, 2013 at 9:07 PM Richard, congratulations on having your poem Featured this past week. It was nice reading your poem tonight. Goodnight~ Linda Richard Palmer October 31, 2013 at 1:31 PM thanks Linda a.k.a Poet A oxox

Michael Dom May 13, 2013 at 2:08 AM Hey, nice structuring. Lusty kind of haiku - senryu? Keep riding that train! Richard Palmer June 6, 2013 at 8:31 AM toot toot,lol I will Michael thanks much

Sukmawati Komala May 6, 2013 at 8:25 AM he he.. so fantastic <3 Richard Palmer June 6, 2013 at 8:30 AM thanks S.K oxox

Mohammad Yamin January 22, 2013 at 12:23 PM Amazing Haikos -very impressive. Thanks for your appreciation of my Senryu Love, Richard -Mohammad Richard Palmer January 24, 2013 at 8:26 PM thank you Mohammad,you are welcome

Juanita Thorn January 13, 2013 at 1:31 AM This is awesome....describes the initial attraction to true love perfectly in so few words. Richard Palmer January 13, 2013 at 5:26 AM thank you Juanita,try my best

Anna-Marie Docherty January 10, 2013 at 7:04 AM Keep them going - if these are your first attempts there is promise for you... one small hint is with the last one, just do a recount of first line...? Not an expert but I do try them myself, so hope it helps. Richard Palmer January 10, 2013 at 12:22 PM thanks Anna,happy you enjoyed,gonna try a few more getting the knack of it lol

Mari Banks January 10, 2013 at 12:01 AM Greetings. I found these vivid and engaging. Particularly the first. I could just see the drool! lol Love Haiku. Richard Palmer January 10, 2013 at 4:44 AM thanks Mari,someone needs a dribbler lol

John Posey January 7, 2013 at 5:21 AM Richard, my friend, As you may know, I had a bad case of Haiku fever awhile back and can speak with some authority on the subject. Once started they are persistant little devils. and can really get under your skin. Now you can trap them and if you get enough of them, cook them up..... They go great with beer...... great Job..... Jake Richard Palmer January 8, 2013 at 6:27 AM thank you very much John,you get the beers,I will do the cooking lol

Frank Polgar January 2, 2013 at 6:40 PM Really like the three steps. Think that happens to a lot of people. But what happens when we fall out of love? A follow up haiku perhaps? Richard Palmer January 2, 2013 at 7:36 PM ok gonna give it a shot,thanks Frank

Daver Austin January 2, 2013 at 8:56 AM I love Haiku, Richard. Keep writing them. And thanks for reading my stuff. Love, daver Richard Palmer January 2, 2013 at 9:38 AM THANK YOU Daver,you are welcome

Debbie Duncan January 2, 2013 at 12:27 AM Well I like these well enough,,, I wrote a few myself... Happy New Year Richard ;} Richard Palmer January 2, 2013 at 5:13 AM happy new year Debbie,thank you oxox

Poet Destroyer A January 1, 2013 at 12:03 PM Hello Richard, , making an appearance on the soup today. Only 2 wish you this coming year to be a glorious one in which rewards all your future poetry with success. I love the time I took out of the first day of the year. 1-1-2013* :-) Just to wish you the best of 2013. Take care my dear poet friend. Thank you for sharing the love train haiku..love them. ~xox~LINDA Richard Palmer January 2, 2013 at 5:12 AM thank you very much Linda,wishing you the greatest 2013 gift LOVE AND MORE LOVE,have a wonderful year oxox

Briana Lynn Minard-Adler December 29, 2012 at 1:58 PM This is really good, I love it Richard Palmer December 30, 2012 at 5:08 AM thank you Briana

Anne-Lise Andresen December 29, 2012 at 7:41 AM HAPPY NEW YEAR 2013,RICHARD !!!!!!! / / oxox Anne-Lise :) Richard Palmer December 30, 2012 at 5:02 AM thank you very much Anne,same to you,oxox

Lucas Ongawo December 29, 2012 at 6:21 AM Richard, i appreciate your stopping by, somehow they are granted, nice one too it feels like first love too.. hmm!- Lucas- Richard Palmer December 29, 2012 at 6:58 AM thanks Lucas,lol

Sukmawati Komala December 29, 2012 at 5:50 AM Hey Richard...thank you so much for your stopping by,,, and appreciate so very much your nice comment... wishing you have a blessed new year...Happy New Year ...<3 Richard Palmer December 29, 2012 at 5:58 AM you are welcome SK,same to you oxox for the new year

Susan Palli December 24, 2012 at 9:57 AM Great job! Richard Palmer December 24, 2012 at 2:34 PM thanks Susan,but I think it needs a little work

Richard Lamoureux December 23, 2012 at 6:36 PM Merry Christmas and belated birthday Richard. Richard Palmer December 23, 2012 at 8:06 PM thank you very much Richard

Anne-Lise Andresen December 23, 2012 at 5:35 AM A little Christmas visit to you Richard. <3 Hope your Christmas will be peaceful and nice!! Sending you a big, warm Christmas hug !!! - MERRY CHRISTMAS - // Anne-Lise :) Richard Palmer December 23, 2012 at 1:07 PM Merry Christmas to you too Anne,warm oxox,fulljoy your holidays

Shonie Griffin December 22, 2012 at 1:12 PM I like it! Thanks for your comments. :) $honie Richard Palmer December 22, 2012 at 2:37 PM thank you Shonie,you are welcome

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