Greg Stanley Poet Acrostic

Love To Rust

R-emember when our love was shiny and new,
U-nused and fresh, like blossoms in the dew.   
S-ome time passes, and we start to deteriorate, 
T-hen our love crumbles; now it’s too late. 

By: Greg Stanley

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Sarah Mullan January 18, 2012 at 2:06 PM Congrats on your winning Greg. Love, Sarah.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl January 17, 2012 at 3:02 AM Good one Congratulations x

Bob Quigley January 16, 2012 at 9:09 PM Congratulations Greg

Lizanne Scholtz January 16, 2012 at 5:14 PM Congratulations on your win Greg, Elizabeth

Andrea Dietrich January 16, 2012 at 4:30 PM Yes, it is often this way. WEll shown with your pleasing poem, Greg. Congrats on your HM

Gwendolen Song January 16, 2012 at 4:19 PM Great analogy of rust and love...u are so versatile using this acrostic..Gwendolen

Michael J. Falotico January 16, 2012 at 11:50 AM Great write my friend... Congrats..... Michael

Carol Sunshine Brown January 16, 2012 at 10:53 AM Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Any Form/Theme" contest Greg. Love, Carol

Robert Pettit December 28, 2011 at 11:13 PM Everything fits like a glove, Greg. Good luck with this in the contest if you are entering it there.

Jack Horne December 23, 2011 at 9:08 AM Clever write, my friend. Fictional, I hope

Harry Horsman December 23, 2011 at 6:29 AM Oh Boy! this is good, so much said in such a small poem, love this, good luck in the contest. harry

Andrea Dietrich December 22, 2011 at 10:44 PM This is fun word play.Or you could also do Lust to dust. hahaha. I really liked this one!

Wilma Neels December 22, 2011 at 10:31 PM That all too familiar feeling, love the way you approach the theme Greg.. All the best for the contest ;) Merry Christmas and a blessed 2012 to you!! ;) Wilma