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...Love This World

"Do not love this world" was a mystery to me a world full of history and beautiful things why not love what God has created the system, the seasons the things that grow the new thing you did'nt know the spinning pin wheel watch it go do not love this world or desire to see it's wonders crumbling under the weight of time plundered by the dogs of war polluted by the folks next door while vacationing abroad do not love this world for what so ever the Lord giveth evil can take it all away like a thief in the night we neither know the time nor the day or that our freedom can be taken away by the things we foolishly love our drugs, our beautiful things do not love this world of vain riches, sorry excuses ungranted wishes, illusive dreams, fantastic schemes and that job that never did amount to success our will to live nourished by dreams and wishes and sometimes that is all do not love this world and count your blessings my body has not paid the ultimate cost nor my mind conceived the greatest lost of what warriors and parents have paid on the treacherous path that was laid before the foundation of the world do not love this world

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Date: 5/18/2009 9:56:00 PM
A powerful write which leaves much to think about. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 5/14/2009 6:15:00 AM
do not love this world-its so easy to form idolatries of the beautful things,people surrounding us,but yes so true we musnt love this world.we were not born to be here forever,so we must think of the better world--the land of no sorrows--great reminder--cheers--charma
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Date: 5/13/2009 11:43:00 AM
I love the line that says.."do not love this world of vain riches, sorry excuses...that is brilliant! We have been given a world that is so much more....we need to see and appreciate. Well done, John ! ~ Carrie
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Date: 5/13/2009 5:40:00 AM
Wow John. You have penned another amazing write here. Truly well done and so worth the read. Love the message. Awesome! Love, Shar
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Date: 5/12/2009 11:38:00 PM
Like the kyrielle flavour John.Rgds Brian &thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 5/12/2009 8:46:00 PM
why can't we just take the time to appreciate god's beauty for, it is all around us, unfortunately so is all the evil and ugliness as you so describe. Well written power piece!
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Date: 5/12/2009 5:06:00 PM
I love your poem. Exactly what I was thinking the other day. I am going to add this to my favorite poems, I hope you dont mind.
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Date: 5/12/2009 4:57:00 PM
There are many things in this world that prompt feelings other than love, but as you say in your first verse, it is what God has given us. Hopefully, we can try to change some of the problems you addressed; it's the only world we have. Very compelling write, John! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/12/2009 4:37:00 PM
I agree for the things of the world cannot bring such eternal happiness. Thank you for commenting my poem. I felt like making a choka into an acrostic just to try something different. I always love reading your comments because you bring such lifting joy to my essence. -Alley
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Date: 5/12/2009 4:24:00 PM
no made up stories -all true-AA unfortunately
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Date: 5/12/2009 4:23:00 PM
You are correct John, this world is temporary. Beautiful write with so much said-AA
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