Love That Lasts a Lifetime

I thought I caught a glimpse of you today
And passing by your door I heard you laugh
Or just a memory, I could not say
It fades away like dusty photographs.

I was ever there for you, so faithful
A haven from life's woes, a sweet retreat
Inside my arms we knit a bond so true
A tie so strong no other love could meet.

Yet all the while I knew you had to go
To venture out and make your dreams come true
And find a love that you could call your own
To make your mark that only you could do.

So proud to see the man that you've become
This mother's love is ever true, dear son.










Written on 10/23/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Haight Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 4:02 PM
Such a lovely, heartfelt poem, Laura, about mother's love. Walked that path myself! Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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November 2, 2015 at 4:31 PM
Thank you, Sandra :)
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November 1, 2015 at 2:43 AM
Laura, Congratulations on your win. :-)Alexis
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November 2, 2015 at 4:30 PM
Thank you, Alexis :)
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October 31, 2015 at 10:25 PM
Beautifully written...Congrats!! :) Be blessed -LU
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October 31, 2015 at 10:30 PM
Thank you, Laura :)
Pettit Avatar
October 29, 2015 at 11:12 AM
A delightful example of a sonnet poem. A pleasure to read.
Leiser Avatar
October 29, 2015 at 1:49 PM
Thank you, Robert. I appreciate your kind and encouraging comments :)
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October 28, 2015 at 7:10 AM
Laura, sweet endearing tribute =`)~Olive Eloisa
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October 29, 2015 at 1:51 PM
Thank you, Olive, and I can't help but think your parents are proud of you from what I can tell about your sweet, kind character! God bless :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 7:14 AM
I wish someday I'd hear one of my parents tell me this...
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October 26, 2015 at 8:10 PM
Oh so sweet. Laura, wonderful poem.
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October 29, 2015 at 1:52 PM
Thank you much, James. Your kind words are appreciated :)
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October 24, 2015 at 12:04 AM
Lovely write Laura heartfelt and beautiful.
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October 24, 2015 at 9:34 AM
I'm glad you liked it, Michael. Thank you!
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October 23, 2015 at 11:06 PM
This is so touching, Laura. A mother's love throbs in all the lines. Brought a tear...made me think of my teenage son, of how soon he'll venture out on his own. Loved this. 7 and hugs!
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October 23, 2015 at 11:18 PM
So glad you could relate to my poem, Kim. It's hard to let them go, but I've also seen both my sons grow and become good men. Hugs, Laura:)
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