Love Tears Slash On the Wall

as we stood
it wasn't good
things when bad
i was very sad
and was so mad
i was about to fall
losing you i had fears
it was
LOVE TEARS SLASH ON THE WALL
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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March 20, 2014 at 1:07 PM
deep poem..thank you for sharing.. ~SKAT~
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March 3, 2014 at 2:11 PM
There was ominous writing on the wall. It appeared to be our last call. We nearly came to an abrupt downfall. However, new hope came just in time. Back up the ladder of life we must climb. They called me back to work today. That was enough good news to make our day.
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