Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

- Love - Sweet - Love -

Hand in hand
                                       Sandy beach with beautiful sunset
                                                            in love

                                    
                                       What could be more romantic than
                                    when the sun is glowing red and orange
                                          melts into the sea somewhere
                               And two who are in love and goes hand in hand

                
                                                       A small box
                                        On his knees in the wet sand beach
                                                     Will you be mine

                                             
                                              She blushes as the sunset
                                                Smiles her lovely smile
                                                        Yes, I would


                                          The sun melts into the sea somewhere
                                    But for a couple in love, the night is still young





08.02.2013
A-L  Andresen :)
("mix poem" )

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Liam Mcdaid October 14, 2014 at 10:39 AM this is so very sweet anne lise deep beautiful piece golden pen Anne-Lise Andresen October 14, 2014 at 12:00 PM - Thanks for your visit and your lovely comments, Liam. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Robin Davis March 1, 2014 at 2:08 PM Anne Lise This is so sweet and romantic, Full of passion and love. Nice write. Thanks for the congrats on my Taming A Heart poem Anne-Lise Andresen March 1, 2014 at 2:50 PM - Highly appreciate your visit and your comments - Thank you Robin. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kevin Goodrum June 3, 2013 at 9:07 PM beautiful is all i have to say about this poem Anne-Lise Andresen June 4, 2013 at 1:39 AM - Thanks for your visit and your kind comments, Kevin. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud May 22, 2013 at 12:28 PM This charms me no end, anne... a way of sweet passion drifts accross the page... a most woderfu; write as always..:) huggs Anne-Lise Andresen May 22, 2013 at 12:30 PM - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Nette. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jiril Clemons May 22, 2013 at 11:39 AM Beautiful poem, Anne. I enjoyed it. My name is Jiril Clemons. Check out some of my poetry, you might like it. Anne-Lise Andresen May 22, 2013 at 11:42 AM - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Jiril. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Stacey Law April 29, 2013 at 4:04 AM Yes , this is a lovely poem. The sunset is so warming to vow of devotion Anne-Lise Andresen April 29, 2013 at 4:12 AM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Stacey. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Danielle Deason April 18, 2013 at 8:31 AM lovely poem, sounds so sweet :) Anne-Lise Andresen April 18, 2013 at 9:19 AM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Danielle. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Duncan April 12, 2013 at 4:32 PM love it Anne - Lisa,,,, don't know how I've missed this gem,,,,thank you for reading my Caturday haiku's, you have an awesome weekend xo's ;} Anne-Lise Andresen April 13, 2013 at 3:59 AM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Debbie. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sasha Maharaj April 8, 2013 at 6:41 AM love at it best. :) Love it Anne-Lise Andresen April 8, 2013 at 6:48 AM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Sasha. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Ae S-K March 21, 2013 at 3:08 PM Simply beautiful. :-) Anne-Lise Andresen March 21, 2013 at 3:11 PM Thanks for your comments and your visit, AE S-K. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Timothy Carter March 17, 2013 at 12:20 PM I enjoy reading your work and I learn from them Tank you for that and for your wonderful comments. Tac Anne-Lise Andresen March 17, 2013 at 12:37 PM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Timothy. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sukmawati Komala March 12, 2013 at 9:28 PM hi hi hi my sweetest Poetess dearest Anne Lise :) i love this piece so much :) so romantic <3 and yes so beautifully written :) thank you for sharing <3 <3 <3 :) Sk Anne-Lise Andresen March 13, 2013 at 2:53 AM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Sukmawati. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sean L Sanders March 7, 2013 at 4:51 PM nicely done poet. Hey if you have time look at a new poet Margherita Russo Anne-Lise Andresen March 8, 2013 at 9:22 AM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Sean. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Dave Timperley February 22, 2013 at 1:50 PM I have always been a romantic at heart. I love the way you put this together and I do love a plan that comes together. Great write Anna-lise God Bless. Dave. Anne-Lise Andresen February 22, 2013 at 1:52 PM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Dave. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Debra Squyres February 22, 2013 at 12:04 PM So lovely !! Sweet romance at it's best...love it!! Anne-Lise Andresen February 22, 2013 at 12:19 PM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Debra. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sara Perry February 18, 2013 at 1:44 AM i love this its so amazing:) Anne-Lise Andresen February 18, 2013 at 7:27 AM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Sara. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Cynthia Alvez February 17, 2013 at 8:59 AM A beautiful verse for my early morning read...Love really can be joyful! Cynthia Anne-Lise Andresen February 17, 2013 at 11:29 AM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Cynthia. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Noel Villarosa February 15, 2013 at 11:08 PM This is evoking a freshness of love affairs harmonizing with nature's kind act. Thanks for sharing this. (^_^) Anne-Lise Andresen February 16, 2013 at 11:28 AM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Noel. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich February 15, 2013 at 10:50 PM gosh, it also almost looks like that beatlemania contest too. Didn't they have a song called love sweet love? Good stuff, sweetie! Anne-Lise Andresen February 16, 2013 at 11:27 AM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Andrea. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Holly Moore February 15, 2013 at 9:31 PM Oh the is just beautiful...it has so much emotion and imagery. Good job! Thanks for your comments and always thinking about me..xxoo Holly Moore Anne-Lise Andresen February 16, 2013 at 11:27 AM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Holly. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath February 15, 2013 at 9:42 AM It's a true magic poem certainly many will remind back, no chance to deny. Thanks my sweet friend for your comment. Loved always, bl Anne-Lise Andresen February 15, 2013 at 11:56 AM Thanks for your comments and your visit, bl. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian February 15, 2013 at 7:48 AM Awwwwww....how sweet and romantic and dreamy! :) Love ya! Thanks for the encouragement you give to me always! God bless you for it! :) Anne-Lise Andresen February 15, 2013 at 11:55 AM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Eileen. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Daver Austin February 14, 2013 at 11:53 AM Very romantic, Anne Lisa - the sand, the beach, two lovers and the sun melting into the sea. By the way, happy Valentine's Day. Love, daver Anne-Lise Andresen February 14, 2013 at 12:00 PM Thanks for your kind visit and your comments, Daver. - Happy V-Day ! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Isaiah Zerbst February 14, 2013 at 11:17 AM Well written. I like it. xoxox Isaiah Zerbst :) Anne-Lise Andresen February 14, 2013 at 11:24 AM Thanks for your kind visit and your comments, Isaiah. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Opondi Ougo February 14, 2013 at 4:40 AM Took me away...sooo deep ...beautiful write...thanks :-) Anne-Lise Andresen February 14, 2013 at 7:16 AM Thanks for your kind visit and your comments, W.C. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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