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Love Story Pt 1 ( Only 100 More To Go )

Down by Passaic, you said you've never seen me. I'm not from here, I'm a Patersonian. Black hair, five feet seven inches tall, prettiest smile a boy would ever see. I know you have pressure to be better than your big bro. But do you know how I REALLY feel about you?! You think I love you but I'm too young for love, do you know that? I just wanna be friends, I just wanna be in your life. Please don't get love and like confused. Please just tell me the truth but do I really want to know? I can't see you and me together anymore, nor can I see us being friends. You say you're busy but I don't believe you. You're only eleven years old and yet I can't explain how you make me feel. My soul and heart are on Cloud Nine, my mind's in outer space, I can barely concentrate.

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Date: 5/18/2010 11:59:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest John.Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/25/2010 5:44:00 PM
only 1 out of 100? Really?!?! I've gotta see how this goes so keep writing! Love Destiny
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