Love Story

I once loved
I once cried
I once died

Love was like the wind
My heart a leaf on a tree
Blown away

beautyintrospectionlight verse

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Ndaba Sibanda

April 22, 2014 at 3:31 PM

Blown away by your beautiful poem. Great work.

Arthur Vaso

April 22, 2014 at 9:38 PM

Thank you Ndaba!!! very kind of you

Kira Price

April 21, 2014 at 6:39 PM

I love this! such emotion expressed beautifully!

Arthur Vaso

April 22, 2014 at 9:39 PM

Much appreciated!!

Connie Marcum Wong

April 21, 2014 at 4:17 AM

I love it when someone can capture the heart with just a few words. Your poem does just that! I am fav'ing this one. Mahalo

Arthur Vaso

April 22, 2014 at 9:39 PM

Glad you liked!!!!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

April 21, 2014 at 4:02 AM

This prose for me projects two meanings.. Thought provoker in simple words... Nice one.. :) , olive eloisa

Arthur Vaso

April 22, 2014 at 9:40 PM

Thank you for those beautiful words!!! :) and I do hope I gave you a smile!

Karen Anglesey

April 20, 2014 at 10:14 PM

Less is more in this one. Such a great sentiment in very few words. Masterpiece :)

Arthur Vaso

April 22, 2014 at 9:41 PM

Thank you, I have tried to say the same thing to the tax man!!! Less is more!!!

Cherl Dunn

April 20, 2014 at 6:39 PM

Well done very beautifully done, thank you for your great comment on my holy father, and again happy easter. cheri

Arthur Vaso

April 22, 2014 at 9:42 PM

Thanks Cherl and I really enjoyed that write!

Liam Mcdaid

April 20, 2014 at 6:18 PM

beautifully penned piece

Arthur Vaso

April 22, 2014 at 9:43 PM

Thanks Liam, any compliment from an Irishman is a compliment indeed!!!!! cheers

Lucilla Carrillo

April 20, 2014 at 5:39 PM

Nice; Sounds like the story of my life. Like two leaves that the wind picked up and while being up - the same wind separated them, never to be together again. Happy Easter. ... Lucy

Arthur Vaso

April 22, 2014 at 9:44 PM

ah yes the wind can be very fickle :(

Andrea Dietrich

April 20, 2014 at 11:18 AM

wow, I love a succinct little poem like this. I think if you only show the last three lines, you can call this a senryu. By itself it is enough to tell the story!!

Arthur Vaso

April 22, 2014 at 9:45 PM

Thanks Andrea :)