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Love Stitches An Ocean

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Love Stitches an Ocean We met once along the lines of short sentences in the aether we exchanged conversations in dreams we thought we were poets but we were just empty chimes echoing the us before us, we existed free verse in the unseen next time 'round when we meet, again, you will remember me you will think déjà vu they say there - in that time and place well, there, there are no guarantees but they say - eventually, if it is to be believed, time stands still we do meet, again we clearly see each in the other, in that strange new time surreal the real you the real me love stitches time back to where we began where we touch, and speak new sentences notes played, again, the keys we should have seen and held closer, to make real our dreams we look through our windows in that new time, we eventually see the deepest ocean that is you and me (LadyLabyrinth/ 2022) “Oceans”/ Coldplay https://youtu.be/D72bzPbZQrI "Meet me in Blue Sky Meet me again ... " LYRICS , “Oceans”, Coldplay https://genius.com/Coldplay-oceans-lyrics ... "Meet me in blue sky Meet me again In the rain [Outro] You've got to find yourself alone in this world You've got to find yourself alone "

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Ts Poetry

Date: 11/6/2023 9:42:00 AM

Beautiful Modesty

I Am Anaya

Date: 8/12/2022 8:03:00 PM

"We tend to find love not where we look for it but where we find it." Goethe

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/12/2022 9:03:00 PM

"The human heart has hidden treasures, In secret kept, in silence sealed; The thoughts, the hopes, the dreams, the pleasures, Whose charms were broken if revealed." Charlotte Bronte

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/12/2022 9:03:00 PM

Treasure Hunt is a phrase that comes to my mind. Then, some might say, needle in a haystack.

I Am Anaya

Date: 8/12/2022 8:00:00 PM

This ancient aboriginal initiation ritual involves exactly this: a long spiritual hike across the indigenous land. “Walkabout,” a rite of passage in which young (adolescent) Aboriginal Australians undertake a journey that will help “transform” them into adults. the individual is required to live and survive all alone in the wilderness. (A similar journey for us to take on)!

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/12/2022 9:04:00 PM

We all go on that Walk-About, some of us remain in The Dreaming....or looking for it... Xx

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 8/12/2022 5:48:00 PM

“It's no good trying to get rid of your own aloneness. You've got to stick to it all your life. Only at times, at times, the gap will be filled in. At times. But you have to wait for the times. Accept your own aloneness and stick to it, all your life. And then accept the times when the gap is filled in, when they come. But they've got to come. You can't force them.” D.H. Lawrence

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/12/2022 5:49:00 PM

"One must learn to love, and go through a good deal of suffering to get to it, and the journey is always towards the other soul." D.H. Lawrence

Steven Young

Date: 8/8/2022 12:15:00 AM

Says to me we are when we~are. Like your outro "you've got to find yourself alone in the world." And when we dive that deep, as in the ocean personified below, there are "arms open, ready to envelope us" our arms. We drown beautifully. Musing your musings.

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/9/2022 3:09:00 AM

Thank you. One can listen to advice, but when all is said and done, we follow our own inner voice. Mistakes will be made, this is an inevitable part of life, without mistakes we do not learn, it's how you pick yourself back up again towards your own victories, if you bring others with you along the way, then there are no failures. I cannot imagine life without music, writing, my creative pursuits. Love comes full circle eventually.

Steven Young
Date: 8/8/2022 3:07:00 AM

Life, I agree, it is and the f'd-up instructions abound. I have even been a f'd-up instructor. Attempting to put things right, I feel those arms open up to me as I find my way home. There's love and encouragement in the universe. Just need to stay tuned--listen to the music.

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/8/2022 1:45:00 AM

Life is an Ocean, is it not? We are in one constant loop, I feel. I'll muse your musings, which speak of drowning. We resurface in the next life, to put things right, or attempt to, otherwise we are 'recycled' again, like being in a washing machine, or dumped in the surf, and pulled back to shore, or dragged out again...we 'alone' can only 'find' ourselves, our own way 'home' ourselves, no matter how many thrust their well-intentioned, or f'd-up instructions upon us, we alone find ourselves ...

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 8/7/2022 5:01:00 AM

A singularity yet cognisable by still mind and animated heart in here now duality ~ enjoyed your soft musings LL

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/7/2022 5:30:00 AM

a dreadful business, Love.

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 8/7/2022 4:19:00 AM

Oceans.

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/7/2022 5:27:00 AM

https://genius.com/Coldplay-oceans-lyrics

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 8/7/2022 3:45:00 AM

Clocks.

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/7/2022 4:20:00 AM

https://youtu.be/8Xv_Hg8o1fw

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/7/2022 3:45:00 AM

https://genius.com/Coldplay-clocks-lyrics

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 8/7/2022 3:41:00 AM

Depths.

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/7/2022 3:41:00 AM

"Love like an ocean is mercurial. Subject to changing constancy; underneath the waves, in the deepest bed lies true love, watching us tread water, waiting for us to turn late or early, it does not matter; we dive deeper to find its arms open, ready to envelop us. We go searching for pearls, drowning in it all, treasure like wisdom to be found. Life above the waves, Blue Sky reflects light, deeper than we care to admit. Sun and gold found in the unlikeliest depths, lighting up all dimensions. And we rise. Eventually."