Love Star Night

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Author's Notes:  This particular write, entitled:  "Love Star Night" is a "Accentual Meter" type of poem.  It appears in my new book under an original release date of February 13, 2015.  (I classified this poem in PoetrySoup under "Free Verse" since this type of accentual metered write is not normally listed under the PS classification pick-list.)  In this poem, I describe two people in love walking under a "Love Star Night."  It's during this walk that the man and woman stop, embrace, kiss, and acknowledge their love and the oneness of being together on " . . . this love star night."  (Gary Bateman -- May 5, 2015) (Accentual Meter)

Categories:  allegory, emotions, feelings, love, metaphor, passion, and romance. 

Accentual Meter Calculations and Notes:          

Accentual Meter Parameters (3 to 6 Syllables per verse)

Range: 5 x 3 = 15 (min) / 5 x 6 = 30 (max)

Total Syllables = 65 (Out of 102 Syllables maximum possible)

Total Words = 51

Total Verses = 17

("How Many Syllables Counter" was used for syllable confirmation for both automated and manual syllable counts and cross-check.)

Love Star Night
					
We walk in love 
hand-in-hand			
under the stars 
star night pure.

Our love’s real
your touch warm			
so inviting now
star night white.

We stop walking
embrace as one               	   	
kissing deeply
with passion
our souls now one.

We gaze skyward 
see stars so bright		
such radiance pure				                                                
this love star night.
		  
Gary Bateman, Copyright © All Rights Reserved, 
(May 5, 2015) (Accentual Meter)

*Original Release Date in my new book: February 13, 2015.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 6/18/2015 8:57:00 PM
Hi G!Very beautifully written romantic sweet love poem,my dear friend Gary.I truly enjoyed it.Awesome imagery. Just beautiful!Golden pen!A 7 + and a fav!:)Sending my love n' prayers to you and Ingrid and wishing you the very best always.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you always!:)D.
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Gary Bateman
Date: 6/19/2015 9:30:00 AM
Hello "D" dear friend!! Thanks for the "7" and "FAV" here!! Ingrid and I likewise send our greetings and blessings to you "D" for a most wonderful weekend!! Cheers and Best Always, Gary
Date: 5/25/2015 3:33:00 PM
What a brilliantly colorful and heartfelt write, Gary. I really, really like this one a lot. Such wonderful imagery and passion in this write. Another 7 for me and a Fav as well. Learning something new again, as always when reading your awesome work. Thanks for sharing. Have a wonderful day....Sharon G. :)
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Date: 5/26/2015 3:55:00 AM
Hello Again Sharon!! Thanks again for the 7 + FAV!! I do recommend that you order a copy of my book "Conversations with My Muse," from Amazon.com or Barnes & Noble. It was released on April 9th and has all of my poetry in it up to February 2015. (The paperback version is the best buy!!) It's a great reference book too. I should mention too that I've contracted with my publisher to do a second book which will be entitled: "Storyteller - A Book of Selected Poetry and Short Stories." I've already started my next group of poems (which will appear first draft Poetry Soup) + my first short story of at least the 6 or 7 stories I have planned. (Publication Date for this second book is well-over one year out.) Best Wishes, Gary
Date: 5/17/2015 1:44:00 PM
dazzling pen gary starlight shining very beautifully painted piece pal
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Gary Bateman
Date: 5/17/2015 2:58:00 PM
Hello Liam!! The special Leprechaun Choir approved my write here!! Glad you liked it Mate!! Best Wishes, Gary
Date: 5/6/2015 5:39:00 AM
Gary, you paint your poetry smoothly, as if red sable bristles were pouring forth colors from the heart. Beautifully.
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Date: 5/6/2015 5:59:00 AM
Thanks ML -- I'm truly touched by the "red sable bristles" and "colors from the heart" images in your comment of my poem hear. I'm a person who loves poetic imagery very much. Thank for your visit and your read for sure -- glad you liked this poem. Best Always, Gary
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