Debbie Guzzi Poet Verse

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Love Songs

Nightingale, the full moon rises
sing me from the Sassafras:
mock the sounds of motors passing,
trill sweet of the small brook's flow,
warble out a troubadour's tale,
call my trembling dear to me.


Debbie Guzzi
Contest: Night Creatures
Nightingale #5
Date: 1/13/15

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Lee Ramage February 11, 2015 at 9:25 PM Very nice Debbie, so glad you are still writing. Congratulations on your poem. Lee

Kelly Deschler January 23, 2015 at 10:00 PM A lovely romantic tone you've brought to this poem, Debbie. I enjoyed it very much. Congrats on first place! It was well deserved!

Kayod5 Kayode January 21, 2015 at 11:03 PM Your Poem like a nightingale singing,I love this Debbie,congrats on the win...huggs

Eve Roper January 21, 2015 at 6:55 PM Debbie, congratulations on your win, beautiful poem. Blessings eve

Andrea Dietrich January 21, 2015 at 2:19 PM fantastic one, Debs. I think probably this bird was the most popular subject of the contest. Congrats.

Sara Kendrick January 21, 2015 at 1:38 PM !!!((())) Way to go!!! Congrats. SK

Richard Lamoureux January 21, 2015 at 7:18 AM A most excellent piece for top honors! Congratulations Debbie!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders January 21, 2015 at 7:11 AM Sweet song of love from your nightingale! Congrats, Debbie, on your first place win...hugs, Rhonda

Teddy Kimathi January 20, 2015 at 11:03 PM Hi Debbie. Congratulations for for your #1 spot. A lovely read indeed! ^_^

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty January 20, 2015 at 10:54 PM Very creative. Congrats on your win Love Debbie>rajat

Dr. Upma A. Sharma January 20, 2015 at 9:19 PM How creative n cute Debbie! I just missed this contest, wish i cud enter this! Congrats on first place win!

Connie Marcum Wong January 20, 2015 at 7:01 PM I was right to see it at the top...it deserves to be there Debbie. Big congratulations on your first place win!

Joseph May January 20, 2015 at 4:29 PM Lovely write Debbie...congrats on a great win

Barbara Gorelick January 20, 2015 at 4:14 PM Congrats..a lovely piece. BG

Barbara Gorelick January 20, 2015 at 4:14 PM Congrats..a lovely piece. BG

John Lawless January 20, 2015 at 3:44 PM This ode to the Nightingale deserves its well earned spot atop the contest tree. Well done.

Frederic Parker January 20, 2015 at 2:44 PM I see why you won well composed poem..congratulations Debbie

Paul Callus January 20, 2015 at 2:36 PM Six lines of musical beauty, Debbie! You nailed this theme. #7 congratulations on a very deserved win!!! // paul

Jan Allison January 20, 2015 at 2:12 PM Dropping back with my congratulations Debbie:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight January 20, 2015 at 12:59 PM Debbie, a huge congratulations on your 1st Place win for this wonderful poem. Hugs, Sandra

Connie Marcum Wong January 18, 2015 at 4:40 PM Debbie, this charming poem is flawless! It is sure to garner top honors! I loved it!#7

Maurice Yvonne January 16, 2015 at 1:08 PM This is unique, novel and flawless in its construction. This should also place high. I hope!

M. L. Kiser January 13, 2015 at 9:36 PM Had to favorite! Best of luck in the contest.

Eileen Manassian January 13, 2015 at 6:49 PM DEBBIE!!! Aren't you amazing! Oh....how I loved Sassafars!!! What a charming word! Troubadour's tale...WOMAN! You just gathered all the pretty words and then gave it that finale! ;) You shine! Debbie Guzzi January 13, 2015 at 7:43 PM aren't you a sweetie pie!

Jan Allison January 13, 2015 at 5:29 PM Wonderful imagery and such a beautiful image Debbie- good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx