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Nightingale, the full moon rises sing me from the Sassafras: mock the sounds of motors passing, trill sweet of the small brook's flow, warble out a troubadour's tale, call my trembling dear to me. Debbie Guzzi Contest: Night Creatures Nightingale #5 Date: 1/13/15

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Date: 2/11/2015 9:25:00 PM
Very nice Debbie, so glad you are still writing. Congratulations on your poem. Lee
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Date: 1/23/2015 10:00:00 PM
A lovely romantic tone you've brought to this poem, Debbie. I enjoyed it very much. Congrats on first place! It was well deserved!
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Date: 1/21/2015 11:03:00 PM
Your Poem like a nightingale singing,I love this Debbie,congrats on the win...huggs
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Date: 1/21/2015 6:55:00 PM
Debbie, congratulations on your win, beautiful poem. Blessings eve
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Date: 1/21/2015 2:19:00 PM
fantastic one, Debs. I think probably this bird was the most popular subject of the contest. Congrats.
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Date: 1/21/2015 1:38:00 PM
!!!((())) Way to go!!! Congrats. SK
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Date: 1/21/2015 7:18:00 AM
A most excellent piece for top honors! Congratulations Debbie!
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Date: 1/21/2015 7:11:00 AM
Sweet song of love from your nightingale! Congrats, Debbie, on your first place win...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 1/20/2015 11:03:00 PM
Hi Debbie. Congratulations for for your #1 spot. A lovely read indeed! ^_^
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Date: 1/20/2015 10:54:00 PM
Very creative. Congrats on your win Love Debbie>rajat
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Date: 1/20/2015 9:19:00 PM
How creative n cute Debbie! I just missed this contest, wish i cud enter this! Congrats on first place win!
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Date: 1/20/2015 7:01:00 PM
I was right to see it at the top...it deserves to be there Debbie. Big congratulations on your first place win!
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Date: 1/20/2015 4:29:00 PM
Lovely write Debbie...congrats on a great win
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Date: 1/20/2015 4:14:00 PM
Congrats..a lovely piece. BG
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Date: 1/20/2015 4:14:00 PM
Congrats..a lovely piece. BG
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Date: 1/20/2015 3:44:00 PM
This ode to the Nightingale deserves its well earned spot atop the contest tree. Well done.
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Date: 1/20/2015 2:44:00 PM
I see why you won well composed poem..congratulations Debbie
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Date: 1/20/2015 2:36:00 PM
Six lines of musical beauty, Debbie! You nailed this theme. #7 congratulations on a very deserved win!!! // paul
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Date: 1/20/2015 2:12:00 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Debbie:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/20/2015 12:59:00 PM
Debbie, a huge congratulations on your 1st Place win for this wonderful poem. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/18/2015 4:40:00 PM
Debbie, this charming poem is flawless! It is sure to garner top honors! I loved it!#7
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Date: 1/16/2015 1:08:00 PM
This is unique, novel and flawless in its construction. This should also place high. I hope!
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Date: 1/13/2015 9:36:00 PM
Had to favorite! Best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 1/13/2015 6:49:00 PM
DEBBIE!!! Aren't you amazing! Oh....how I loved Sassafars!!! What a charming word! Troubadour's tale...WOMAN! You just gathered all the pretty words and then gave it that finale! ;) You shine!
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/13/2015 7:43:00 PM
aren't you a sweetie pie!
Date: 1/13/2015 5:29:00 PM
Wonderful imagery and such a beautiful image Debbie- good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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