Love Song

luring waves beckon,
as the sea sings its love song,
to a sleepy sun.     

Copyright © 2010  By Caryl S. Muzzey

First Place Winner ~ "Seascape” Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Raul Moreno
February 15, 2010
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fraser Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 4:37 AM
Wonderful Haiku Caryl, many congratualtions in Raul's contest >> James
Beam Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 7:00 PM
congratulations good point of veiw
K. Avatar
February 21, 2010 at 6:46 AM
congrats on your win with this unique haiku, Caryl :)
Palli Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 12:38 PM
excellent!
Smith Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 7:10 AM
wow this is a great haiku. congrats on getting first place in the seascapes contest you desvered it with this great piece! =)jo
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February 17, 2010 at 11:34 PM
Congrats on your win! Well deserved. Best wishes, Caroline.
Clark Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 12:51 PM
Congradulations on your first place win Caryl!! Lovely! Jeralynn
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February 16, 2010 at 3:20 PM
Congratulations on your first place Caryl! Awesome!
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February 16, 2010 at 1:02 PM
A very beckoning and alluring write, Caryl. A big congratulations! LUv, andrea
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February 16, 2010 at 5:26 AM
Congratulations Caryl, on your 1st Place win in Raul’s “Seascapes” poetry contest with this creative haiku that lures the heart to a beautiful place. Your poem is outstanding. Keep the winning words flowing! Smiles, Dane Ann
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February 16, 2010 at 5:20 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's Seascape contest Caryl. Love,Carol
Haick Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 7:56 PM
My congratulations on you Ist Place Win in Raul's "Seascapes" Contest, Caryl! Great job! Peace, Audrey
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February 15, 2010 at 5:29 PM
Congratulations, Caryl....a lovely haiku and well deserving this win! ~ Carrie
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February 15, 2010 at 4:27 PM
congratulations on your success with this fine haiku Caryl...Margaret
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February 15, 2010 at 3:14 PM
Congrats Caryl on your first place win in Raul's contest.. a wonderful win for a wonderful write.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
La France Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 2:20 PM
Congratulations on first place!!!!
Moreno Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 2:15 PM
Caryl, congratulations in winning the contest...Raul
Clark Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 2:20 PM
Ahh sounds so peacful! Beautiful! Jeralynn
Mills Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 1:55 PM
I love the last line. -Susan Mills
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