Love So Weak

There is nothing I can say, to change your heart.
Your voice will stay, yet we're apart.
Is this hard to understand, for this love's so weak.
I'd take your hand, If I could only speak.
I see you next to me, I am not afraid.
I can now see, why the love stayed.
I never, thought I'd wait forever.
If I fall, would you wait for me?
I know you saw, that I waited so patiently.
There was a time, when our star fell.
The lost rhyme, told of our love as well.
Sometimes I get the feeling, your watching over me.
My heart's for healing, you loved so passionantly.
Though you're not here, I feel your presence.
I can feel your every tear, your sorrow I can sense.
They could care less, as long as we bleed.
The pain I confess, so my heart can be freed.
I live this life in misery, I don't know what to do.
No breath left inside of me, now that I've lost you.
Memories are calling, so I say goodbye.
My tears are falling, I sorrowfully cry.
I pray for the pain, to pass me by.
This drowning rain, helps me die.
Where do we go, I am lost.
I did not know, what was true love's cost.
You fight me, wanting me to carry on.
But I only see, that you are gone.
What is going wrong, what should we fix?
Though I've known for so long, I ignored your tricks.
Your left in my vision, what could I say?
If you knew my determination, would it matter anyway?
I feel your self mutilation, yet I'm so far away.
I live the same asphyxiation, every day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 2/21/2009 2:49:00 PM
Dear Steven, "The pain I confess, so my heart can be freed" is quite poignant. Sometimes we have to release our misery in our words, just as I did in "Too Fast for Me." I hope you find someone who appreciates your sensitivity! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/2/2009 2:50:00 PM
lovely poem Steven, hope to read the rest of it! ....Maryam
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Date: 1/1/2009 4:25:00 PM
beautiful write... *Breana
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