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Love Ruled the Heart

Perfect limber lassie; she leapt on her toes, dancing, rousing sassy loose and red hot pose. Swaddled simple, graceful rich and rare she dared. Simper very playful light mood she had shared. Slightest hurried impulse she took a light glance often enough avulse thought of course to dance. Welcomed whirlwind romance whiled love ruled the heart into lasting advance flames struck and took part. 2/21/2018 Poetry Contest: 88 Syllables' Sponsor By: Joseph May 64 words 88 syllables

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Date: 4/9/2018 7:38:00 PM
A fun read. Congrats on your win, Eve.
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Date: 3/16/2018 11:40:00 PM
EXCELLENT COMPOSITION. Congrats Eve to win. I admire last stanza most. Hugs.
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Date: 3/15/2018 9:46:00 PM
So romantic and charming - I love this! Blessings and congratulations on your wonderful win, Eve - keep up the great work, my friend! :-) <3
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Date: 3/14/2018 6:27:00 PM
Love does rule the heart Eve. This is romantic and lovely. Congratulations on your wonderful win! xxoo : )
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Date: 3/14/2018 4:15:00 PM
Nicely done, Eve. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/14/2018 10:18:00 AM
Congratulations Eve.
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Date: 2/22/2018 8:20:00 AM
Well written Eve! Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 2/22/2018 8:18:00 AM
Great job with 88 syllables, Eve, she sounds like fun!! xxoo
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Date: 2/22/2018 7:02:00 AM
You wrote this difficult form well Eve..best for a win.
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Date: 2/21/2018 9:25:00 PM
You rose to the challenge well Eve. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 2/21/2018 9:13:00 PM
Awesome, Eve. Not an easy task but you tackled it with talented prose. Love your word choices.
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Date: 2/21/2018 7:29:00 PM
A fine 88, Eve, and I haven't seen the word 'avulse' in years, Good luck in the contest. Viv x
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