Love Rings Like Bluebells

Thy love rings like bluebells caught in spring’s breeze
Singing out to my heart heaven’s chorus
Such beauteous song brings larks to their knees
Humming birds charm-ed stilly and voiceless
Thy radiant smile beclouds the sun’s rays
Jaundice daffodils wilt in thy presence
Thou favour emits an opium haze
Lovers’ Lorelei reborn in essence
To mine folly I court thee with ardour
Thy golden locks weave a web ‘round my soul
Beguiling eyes yield thee my surrender
Sempiternal truth insanity stole
	Foreseen temptress thy counsel I not heed
	Forewarned I ne’er beheld such love from thee

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 7/2/2025 2:22:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 1/26/2016 11:44:00 PM
KAT, A great pleasure to find and read the inspiration poured from your pen today. Love ** SKAT **
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Date: 9/1/2010 3:25:00 PM
A lovely write
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Date: 6/18/2009 11:29:00 AM
This is gorgeous, Kat! Your form is impeccable and your imagery, glorious! It's going into my favorites. Donna
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Date: 5/26/2009 2:13:00 PM
I love the colour of Bluebells Kat, and such a beautiful flower. You captured them totally in this kool poem, may i have you comment on my poem Bluebell Wood, James
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Date: 5/12/2009 7:48:00 AM
Hooked ... you are a genius and something tells me you are just beginning to explode into perfection ... I shall be catching all pieces for a memorial. Love
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Date: 5/10/2009 4:07:00 PM
Simply gorgeous sweetie! Impeccable cadence and rhyme, and such beautiful sentiment! Love, Keith
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Date: 5/10/2009 3:46:00 PM
wow, this is beautiful! Well done!
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Date: 5/10/2009 11:53:00 AM
Beautiful sonnet Kat, loved to many lines to list...Raul
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