Love Rings Like Bluebells

Thy love rings like bluebells caught in spring’s breeze
Singing out to my heart heaven’s chorus
Such beauteous song brings larks to their knees
Humming birds charm-ed stilly and voiceless
Thy radiant smile beclouds the sun’s rays
Jaundice daffodils wilt in thy presence
Thou favour emits an opium haze
Lovers’ Lorelei reborn in essence
To mine folly I court thee with ardour
Thy golden locks weave a web ‘round my soul
Beguiling eyes yield thee my surrender
Sempiternal truth insanity stole
	Foreseen temptress thy counsel I not heed
	Forewarned I ne’er beheld such love from thee
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Agustin Avatar
July 2, 2025 at 2:22 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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January 26, 2016 at 11:44 PM
KAT, A great pleasure to find and read the inspiration poured from your pen today. Love ** SKAT **
Brown Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 3:25 PM
A lovely write
Golden Avatar
June 18, 2009 at 11:29 AM
This is gorgeous, Kat! Your form is impeccable and your imagery, glorious! It's going into my favorites. Donna
Fraser Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 2:13 PM
I love the colour of Bluebells Kat, and such a beautiful flower. You captured them totally in this kool poem, may i have you comment on my poem Bluebell Wood, James
Shango Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 7:48 AM
Hooked ... you are a genius and something tells me you are just beginning to explode into perfection ... I shall be catching all pieces for a memorial. Love
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May 10, 2009 at 4:07 PM
Simply gorgeous sweetie! Impeccable cadence and rhyme, and such beautiful sentiment! Love, Keith
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May 10, 2009 at 3:46 PM
wow, this is beautiful! Well done!
Moreno Avatar
May 10, 2009 at 11:53 AM
Beautiful sonnet Kat, loved to many lines to list...Raul
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