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Love Rings Like Bluebells

Thy love rings like bluebells caught in spring’s breeze Singing out to my heart heaven’s chorus Such beauteous song brings larks to their knees Humming birds charm-ed stilly and voiceless Thy radiant smile beclouds the sun’s rays Jaundice daffodils wilt in thy presence Thou favour emits an opium haze Lovers’ Lorelei reborn in essence To mine folly I court thee with ardour Thy golden locks weave a web ‘round my soul Beguiling eyes yield thee my surrender Sempiternal truth insanity stole Foreseen temptress thy counsel I not heed Forewarned I ne’er beheld such love from thee

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/26/2016 11:44:00 PM
KAT, A great pleasure to find and read the inspiration poured from your pen today. Love ** SKAT **
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Date: 9/1/2010 3:25:00 PM
A lovely write
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Date: 6/18/2009 11:29:00 AM
This is gorgeous, Kat! Your form is impeccable and your imagery, glorious! It's going into my favorites. Donna
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Date: 5/26/2009 2:13:00 PM
I love the colour of Bluebells Kat, and such a beautiful flower. You captured them totally in this kool poem, may i have you comment on my poem Bluebell Wood, James
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Date: 5/12/2009 7:48:00 AM
Hooked ... you are a genius and something tells me you are just beginning to explode into perfection ... I shall be catching all pieces for a memorial. Love
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Date: 5/10/2009 4:07:00 PM
Simply gorgeous sweetie! Impeccable cadence and rhyme, and such beautiful sentiment! Love, Keith
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Date: 5/10/2009 3:46:00 PM
wow, this is beautiful! Well done!
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Date: 5/10/2009 11:53:00 AM
Beautiful sonnet Kat, loved to many lines to list...Raul
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