Seren Roberts Poet Free verse

Love - Reverse Contest

Love in reverse?


She had lain
Hair like a halo
About her pillow
Had awaited her lover
Pleasing  her soul
Kissing and nibbling
Crying out in passion
Now, yes now,
Bodies entwined
Swaying to lovers music
Sensually to the beat of the heart
With crescendo's of release. 
Immortal endless love
Complete


Reverse Contest - read it backwards as well
Penned  11 August 2013

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Arthur Vaso August 17, 2013 at 11:37 PM Very well done, loved this one! Seren Roberts August 18, 2013 at 12:20 AM Thank you. Seren

Andrea Dietrich August 12, 2013 at 3:21 PM Seren, I really like this, but I feel like I must be getting it all wrong. I was trying to read it from the very final word and go all the way backwards word by word instead of line by line. I need to find out what he means. If we can do it backward by LINES, it won't be nearly as difficult as I imagined!! GOOD job. Seren Roberts August 12, 2013 at 4:05 PM you can read it line by line backwards and it makes sense mostly(lol) Seren Roberts August 12, 2013 at 3:58 PM awww dont say that i did it line by line. dont fancy re-writing it. let me know what you find out.please...Seren

Russell Sivey August 12, 2013 at 11:04 AM This is a beautiful and wonderful write here my friend! I truly loved reading this harmonious poem this afternoon! What a glorious piece, Great Work!! Seren Roberts August 12, 2013 at 12:32 PM Thsnks Russell, hlad you enjoyed it ....Seren