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Love Rests Between Us

'To see is to believe,' and the fact Remains that all we believe may not be. I see you, and you see me... but Love you cannot not see. si(I see not our breaths, love, but I believe we breathe)gh Would you, could you - After all, I'm disclosing this mask Right here in front of you - At least, believe in me?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/4/2009 1:38:00 PM
Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patty
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Date: 9/26/2009 3:58:00 AM
Congrats 2u on your poem making it through to the finals, bravo!
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Date: 9/25/2009 4:47:00 AM
cris! congrats. :)
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Date: 9/24/2009 12:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/8/2009 9:39:00 PM
Very clever, enjoyed it very much...Sabrina
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Date: 8/4/2009 4:02:00 PM
Very original write here Cris. I like what you did with the word "sigh" ... very clever ... and a well-deserved selection to be a feature this week at the Soup. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/4/2009 1:00:00 PM
Congrats Cris on your poem being featured this week. Vince
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Date: 8/3/2009 8:01:00 PM
Cris his is a very impressive poem - I greatly enjoyed the read - Congratulations on being featured - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 8/3/2009 1:02:00 PM
Ineresting write, well worth the feature.......:JP]
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Date: 8/3/2009 12:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being selected to be featured this week . Love, Carol
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Date: 8/3/2009 9:22:00 AM
congratulations on your featured poem, God bless you from diane
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Date: 8/3/2009 7:37:00 AM
Sorry Cris,..I just can't help but comment again,...the way you filtered in that sigh !!!!,...my oh my,..true artistic quality !!!! Congrats again !!!! james
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Date: 8/3/2009 7:34:00 AM
What a trully great poem Cris,..I adore it,..and congratulations on its feature this week!!!! james
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Date: 8/3/2009 4:34:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured>>James
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Date: 4/18/2009 6:45:00 AM
nice write...i like love poems...take care..._chily_
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Date: 4/17/2009 11:49:00 PM
this is an amazing poem. this is going to my favs. brilliant. i hope to read more of your work
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Date: 4/14/2009 6:44:00 AM
Beautiful.
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