Wilma Neels Poet Free verse

'love Remain'

A pale light tussle the dark
minuscule spaces lit up-
friendship starts with a smile

    Solitude chased away and love remain













11th place in Parise Pariku Contest
Sponsored by Rick Parise 

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Dec 2010

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Carol Sunshine Brown January 13, 2011 at 11:15 AM Congratulations on your win Wilma in Rick's "Pariku Contest". Love, Carol

Kash Poet January 7, 2011 at 4:36 AM Congrats Wilma on your well deserved win in Rick's contest!

John Freeman January 7, 2011 at 3:05 AM Congratulations Wilma on your worthy poem's honored place. Agape, Moses

Audrey Haick January 6, 2011 at 9:02 PM I love this, Wilma...love your take on the contest! Congratulations on your deserving win! Love, Audrey

Nette Onclaud January 6, 2011 at 8:52 PM best of cheers for a great win in the contest… just lovely! : )nette

Tahera Mannan January 6, 2011 at 7:59 PM Beautiful Wilma.Many congratulations for this super success.

Sara Kendrick January 6, 2011 at 4:51 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara

Carrie Richards January 6, 2011 at 4:25 PM Love this!! (Especially the third line....just wonderful !!) congratulations, Wilma!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 6, 2011 at 3:27 PM Congrats Wilma on your wonderful win in Rick's contest with this lovely entry my friend.. enjoy another successful win with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta January 6, 2011 at 3:15 PM Congratulations on the 11th place win in the contest of Rick, Wilma

Andrea Dietrich January 6, 2011 at 1:45 PM Congratulations to you, Wilma. Glad to see you on the winner list, down here by me. heehee. Luv ya, Andrea

Paul James December 29, 2010 at 2:17 PM The idea of a 'pale light tussle' is superb, very evocative as a whole,too.

James Fraser December 25, 2010 at 7:23 AM Nicely written, many a freindship has been started with a friendly smile. Another little joy, written by another joy....:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 24, 2010 at 8:35 AM Powerful lines Wilma my friend.. that last line is true for most every phase of life..friendship is very important... luv more so ... starts with a sweet smile too.. enjoy Christmas Eve and Day with luv and blessings..too...

Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway December 23, 2010 at 7:21 AM Such truth Wilma. A warm smile can truly chase loneliness away. I enjoy this so...Lay

Andrea Dietrich December 23, 2010 at 6:16 AM Aweseome, WIlma! LUv, Andrea