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Love Raid

Love raided the heart And occupied my mind There was no chance But to surrender For, the love army surrounded the gates Hopes failed Wishes shattered Army encountered Ceasefire was restored I began to forget the hard days The army again planned an offence Where I had no chance of defence From then on: I am in a state of alert Where I cannot avert The sweet pain of love

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Beata Agustin

Date: 9/7/2023 2:03:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your wisdom through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Skat A

Date: 5/4/2016 11:43:00 AM

Ahmed Waheed Sarmed, I'm just here visiting your poem once again. If you ever return to post, I'd like to come back to read your newest. Happy Days **SKAT**

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/27/2016 7:48:00 PM

AHMED, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 9/9/2015 8:56:00 AM

Ahmed, enjoyed reading your verse today. SKAT

Debbie Duncan

Date: 10/1/2012 11:06:00 PM

nicely worded poem you got here ,,