Ahmed Waheed Sarmed Poet Free verse

Love Raid

Love raided the heart

And occupied my mind

There was no chance

But to surrender

For, the love army surrounded the gates

Hopes failed

Wishes shattered

Army encountered

Ceasefire was restored

I began to forget the hard days

The army again planned an offence

Where I had no chance of defence

From then on:

I am in a state of alert

Where I cannot avert

The sweet pain of love

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Beata Agustin September 7, 2023 at 2:03 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your wisdom through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Skat A May 4, 2016 at 11:43 AM Ahmed Waheed Sarmed, I'm just here visiting your poem once again. If you ever return to post, I'd like to come back to read your newest. Happy Days **SKAT**

Poet Destroyer A January 27, 2016 at 7:48 PM AHMED, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. LOVE LINDA

Skat A September 9, 2015 at 8:56 AM Ahmed, enjoyed reading your verse today. SKAT

Debbie Duncan October 1, 2012 at 11:06 PM nicely worded poem you got here ,,