Love Poem With a Very Very Naughty Ending

Yes you caused it the creases on my face
I may look like an old book without the last page
But they say I have aged with … somewhat grace
Which, they said laughing, complements my age

It used to be considered as a sexy smile
But I have not used it for a while 
Well only when I have a pile 
But you cannot count that as a smile

You are as fresh as a polo mint 
I hope you can interpret my little hint
It’s been a while since someone made me feel the way
And I thought I’d let you know before the end of the day

Ignore my rhymes 
As I use different kinds
As long as you know the way I feel
Naked as an orange without it’s peel

Naked because I am shy
That is the reason, if you wondering why
So from the heart this is from me
Thank you me good friend P.D

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 9/30/2010 2:01:00 PM
lol, and i get the ending part.. the poem is not dirty or naughty..lol.. Just the evil grin of me smiling to the poem..ty,..p..
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Date: 9/30/2010 1:59:00 PM
AWEEEE! wow! i'm just now reading this one,,lol,, was afraid to open it.((title)) And thanks for calling me your friend.. I still remeber that one poem you slamed me and @my Gr33n, with. Sydney, im so glad I found myself enjoying a couple of your poems today. I just got done reading the one with Linda-Marie. You sure are a good poet. Funny tooooo and thanks for the thanks,..P.D.
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