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Love Poem Using Words Four Letters Or Less

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Your soft lips make me so glad that I am with you now. When I am in your arms, and you hold me, I feel so good some how. You are the one that I need to be with, its so true. When we are in a room full of talk my ears only hear you. My eyes only see you in the day or in the dark my love so dear. I beam when you are near, you take away all fear. You know just what I like. Each gift you give it does mean so much. I will wait and I will pray that a day may come as such, You will get down on one knee and give me a ring very soon. Each soul will join and it will feel as if we can fly to the moon.

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Karen Jones

Date: 9/29/2023 10:16:00 PM

Wow. Your romantic write is surely a winner. Good luck in the contest.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 9/30/2023 12:20:00 AM

That's lovely of you to say Karen. Your encouragement. I have long since learned, just when you feel you are on top, there is always someone able to climb a little higher. I guess that's what keeps us all trying harder. :) Thank you for your lovely comment.

Valsa George

Date: 9/29/2023 10:04:00 PM

You have written a wonderful poem staying within the great constraint of short words. Yet nothing is lacking here . Emotions cascade down in easeful flow and in lovely rhythm. Much enjoyed, dear SV!

Speaks Volumes
Date: 9/30/2023 12:17:00 AM

I knew not knowing all those big words would come in handy some day Valsa !! Thank you sweet one for your kind words. I am not sure if there is a sweeter person than you !

Jay Narain

Date: 9/28/2023 10:06:00 AM

Nice picture and a loving poem.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 9/28/2023 10:22:00 AM

Jay I look forward to reading your delightful comments. Sorry I haven't been reading or commenting lately, Spring cleaning had to be done before my granddaughter and her fiancé arrive for a few weeks. I will catch up when they return to home to California. Thank you Jay.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/27/2023 8:45:00 PM

Very well done, SV:)

Speaks Volumes
Date: 9/27/2023 10:53:00 PM

I think it might be easier for simple poets like me who don't use big words usually anyway. Thanks for you encouragement Jo

Di11y Da11y

Date: 9/27/2023 12:59:00 PM

I'm currently struggling with this one - good luck in the contest

Speaks Volumes
Date: 9/27/2023 1:22:00 PM

Lol you and SO are nuts.. This took me less than 5 minutes, including finding the picture.. Easy because I don't use big words normally anyway. Thnx for the GL

Silent One

Date: 9/27/2023 12:21:00 PM

This looks like a form that takes time to write and you have done really well here. It has not lost the romantic feeling despite the restrictions of the form.. Good luck in the contest..

Speaks Volumes
Date: 9/27/2023 1:28:00 PM

Took me less than 5 minutes. It only looks hard for those that are used to long eloquent words. I will be offline for some weeks so I am trying to get a few more done now. I have no more time to spend on it. Thanks for the nice comment SO.