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Love Or Hate Minichu

When you are given hate can you reciprocate it by giving back love or you hate? When you get hate for clear conscience, and peace give love not hate No sin if you give love Win When you are given hate for clear conscience, and peace give love Win 10th February 2021 Written for love or hate minichu contest by Mohan Chutani Syllable count checked at poetry soup syllabus counter 6 12 3 0 4 8 2 0 2 4 1 0 6 8 1

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Date: 3/5/2021 8:38:00 AM
Hi Rama, Well said, what deep questions to ponder. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 3/6/2021 2:38:00 AM
Thanks and same to you. Take care, Rama
Date: 3/5/2021 6:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Yes, win with love. Love and laugh and one will be happy. Have a blessed day....................
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Date: 3/6/2021 2:38:00 AM
Thanks and same to you. Take care, Rama
Date: 3/5/2021 6:36:00 AM
congrats on your win!Rama! great message!
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Date: 3/6/2021 2:37:00 AM
Thanks and same to you. Take care, Rama
Date: 3/5/2021 6:35:00 AM
Hi Rama. Another great write from you and your pen. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 3/6/2021 2:37:00 AM
Thanks and same to you. Take care, Rama
Date: 3/5/2021 3:23:00 AM
Rama, thanx for participating in my contest. You showed us that hate should be mellowed down through love and patience. Congrats for your placement in my contest. Best. Mohan.
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 3/5/2021 5:16:00 AM
Thanks for the placement.
Date: 2/12/2021 3:33:00 AM
I say, Brilliant piece! shalom, shanthi OM, Salaams
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Date: 2/12/2021 4:20:00 AM
Thanks. Take care Rama
Date: 2/10/2021 9:01:00 PM
Hate can only destroy the hater. Rama, great message for all here.
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Date: 2/10/2021 9:04:00 PM
I agree fully. Hate destroys hater more than the person hated. Best to forgive forget and enjoy the moment in front. Take care Rama
Date: 2/10/2021 5:06:00 PM
Fight hate with flower power! Nice write, Rama! :) gw
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 2/10/2021 5:35:00 PM
Thanks Gerson.
Date: 2/10/2021 12:43:00 PM
Well said Rama. The Bible says: "Beloved let us love one another. For love is of God and everyone who loveth is born of God and knoweth God. He that loveth not knoweth not God for God is love." 1 John 4:7-8 Also the unknown prophet says: When you are treated badly smile. It worries your enemies and they wonder what you are up to. ;)
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 2/10/2021 5:35:00 PM
What a wonderful comments. Great words. I will treasure these words and use them in my poem as quote. No Idea of bible. Never read one. Second part well said. Thanks. :)
Date: 2/10/2021 9:32:00 AM
good one. In case you did not see what I replied to you, I will copy paste it here. Regarding double dactyl thing: they said it this way: Another line, usually the sixth often has a single, double dactyl phrase that has never been used in conventional poems.(I took it to mean "made up" word. Their example was "necro-romantically" But in another part they said a word like valedictorian is ok, so I guess I did not have to worry about that!!
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Date: 2/10/2021 2:57:00 AM
Good advice Rama, when facing hate rise above, peace only comes with the grace of love. Regards, Belle
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Date: 2/10/2021 4:03:00 AM
Beautiful comment. Peace only comes with grace of love. Do very true. Take care Rama
Date: 2/9/2021 10:53:00 PM
The best lesson: hate never wins. ~~
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Date: 2/10/2021 4:02:00 AM
I agree. Hate spoils our mind and life.

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