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Love On Wheels


United couple
A road of hazardous turns
Two Hearts on the wheel

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James Fraser

Date: 9/14/2009 12:53:00 PM

True love will have the wheel turning the same way, tender poem Abe>>James

Brian Strand

Date: 4/30/2009 8:11:00 AM

Nice work Abe.Rgds Brian

James Marshall Goff

Date: 4/26/2009 5:34:00 PM

Abe! a remarkable senryu filled much love! Jim

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 4/25/2009 7:38:00 AM

Hello Mr. Lopez, you did it again, short poem with a load of message. Thank you for sharing this. Ernilando

Charlene Bird

Date: 4/23/2009 8:27:00 PM

ah yes! The spiraling wheels of love turning, how sweet! A great artistic write!

Darleen Bilyeu

Date: 4/21/2009 10:50:00 AM

awsomely great!!! love the last line!!!

S. Michael Fuller

Date: 4/21/2009 9:16:00 AM

artistic freedom we all seek to express it you are the Man, Abe!

Maryann Guoladdle

Date: 4/21/2009 9:11:00 AM

Love it, sounds like a perfect carefree couple!!

Anna Mayall

Date: 4/21/2009 6:02:00 AM

good job loved it

Christina Vasquez

Date: 4/20/2009 11:16:00 AM

Nicely done keep up the good work...

Tyler Davis

Date: 4/19/2009 1:59:00 PM

And sometimes the road has bumps we must go over. nice work..

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/19/2009 7:08:00 AM

Wonderful description....great work in such a few words! :) love, Carrie

Arany P.

Date: 4/19/2009 2:45:00 AM

haha ... lovely senryu, Abe! 2 hearts on the wheel ... that is awesome! :) ~ Arany

Brian Strand

Date: 4/19/2009 12:59:00 AM

Excellent visual Abe.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome blog comment

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 4/18/2009 7:11:00 PM

This is so "cool".. love it. BG

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/18/2009 5:01:00 PM

You are awesome with the short forms Abe. Most excellent and clever Senryu. Love, Shar

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 4/18/2009 4:48:00 PM

Great use of imagery! Wonderfully done! Laura :)

Date: 4/18/2009 4:06:00 PM

So much truth in these three lines. Through the challenges, ture love endures. Creative way of sharing that message. Thank you for sharing your senryu with us and for your kind words on my poem. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen