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Love On Wheels


United couple
A road of hazardous turns
Two Hearts on the wheel

lifelovesenryu

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James Fraser

September 14, 2009 at 12:53 PM

True love will have the wheel turning the same way, tender poem Abe>>James

Brian Strand

April 30, 2009 at 8:11 AM

Nice work Abe.Rgds Brian

James Marshall Goff

April 26, 2009 at 5:34 PM

Abe! a remarkable senryu filled much love! Jim

Ernilando Tugaff

April 25, 2009 at 7:38 AM

Hello Mr. Lopez, you did it again, short poem with a load of message. Thank you for sharing this. Ernilando

Charlene Bird

April 23, 2009 at 8:27 PM

ah yes! The spiraling wheels of love turning, how sweet! A great artistic write!

Darleen Bilyeu

April 21, 2009 at 10:50 AM

awsomely great!!! love the last line!!!

S. Michael Fuller

April 21, 2009 at 9:16 AM

artistic freedom we all seek to express it you are the Man, Abe!

Maryann Guoladdle

April 21, 2009 at 9:11 AM

Love it, sounds like a perfect carefree couple!!

Anna Mayall

April 21, 2009 at 6:02 AM

good job loved it

Christina Vasquez

April 20, 2009 at 11:16 AM

Nicely done keep up the good work...

Tyler Davis

April 19, 2009 at 1:59 PM

And sometimes the road has bumps we must go over. nice work..

Carrie Richards

April 19, 2009 at 7:08 AM

Wonderful description....great work in such a few words! :) love, Carrie

Arany P.

April 19, 2009 at 2:45 AM

haha ... lovely senryu, Abe! 2 hearts on the wheel ... that is awesome! :) ~ Arany

Brian Strand

April 19, 2009 at 12:59 AM

Excellent visual Abe.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome blog comment

Barbara Gorelick

April 18, 2009 at 7:11 PM

This is so "cool".. love it. BG

Sharon Winter

April 18, 2009 at 5:01 PM

You are awesome with the short forms Abe. Most excellent and clever Senryu. Love, Shar

Laura Mckenzie

April 18, 2009 at 4:48 PM

Great use of imagery! Wonderfully done! Laura :)

April 18, 2009 at 4:06 PM

So much truth in these three lines. Through the challenges, ture love endures. Creative way of sharing that message. Thank you for sharing your senryu with us and for your kind words on my poem. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen