Love On a Black Horse

She's a curse and a blessing.
A giving of wings and a damnation.
The sins of her soul are calling,
Amidst a beautiful song of loving version.
Her demons they dance in unison,
Her angels blow their horns in rhythmic cords.
She'll suck your poison and seal your burden,
Lifting your heart onto the saddle of a black horse.
She'll ride you into the sunset lulling you to sleep,
Whispering promises of a life laden with dreams.
A land where, within soil, innocent blood runs deep.
Trees are withered and barren glowing in moonbeams.
Her mask will fall away and she'll begin to screech.
Her hair will fall in cobras, hissing and baring their teeth.
Your fingers will ache to grab the reigns still out of reach.
The earth will shudder, overflow, and crack beneath.
Millions of sinning souls will fill the chrispened air.
Your mind will want to believe this is only fiction.
As you sink into blood soaked earth, you despair.
Love is not always lifting. It's a decaying addiction.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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February 12, 2014 at 7:54 AM
Hello Sam, so deep and true. Love is nothing more than a decaying addiction. Where are you? xox~ Sam
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February 13, 2014 at 6:08 PM
Hello dear. My apologies for the absence. Been working on short stories as of late. Thanks for stopping by! Xoxox - Sam
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January 29, 2014 at 3:22 PM
You are off and running on this site with this impressive first entry.
Beloved Avatar
February 13, 2014 at 6:08 PM
Thank you Robert :)
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January 23, 2014 at 8:19 AM
A tremendous first offering. You have skills, I will read some more. Welcome to the soup. I hope you find the reins and that the horse has wings so you can transcend all limitations. I believe true love to be limitless.
Beloved Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 12:10 PM
Thank you Richard :)
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January 16, 2014 at 10:21 AM
,had a tune years ago - Gloomy Sunday - that actually drove some people nuts. Let's not set your poem to music, huh. I like your style, Sam. want to read more of your stuff. Congrats, daver
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January 27, 2014 at 12:09 PM
Thanks :)
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January 9, 2014 at 10:08 PM
Congratulations on this fine win, Sam
Beloved Avatar
January 9, 2014 at 10:17 PM
I don't want to have ignorance be my first impression. However, ill admit I have entirely no clue what I've won. Thank you though. I appreciate the congratulations :)
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January 9, 2014 at 4:54 PM
well, you're optimistic, aren't you? your words are magnetic, though. i love your sentences and the way they... make me think. happy new year! (very late, i know) -vivixxx
Beloved Avatar
January 9, 2014 at 10:14 PM
Haha you're right it is very morbid. A happy New year to you as well! Thanks for taking the time to read and comment :)
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January 7, 2014 at 3:36 PM
Hi Sam, . Congratulations, and thank you for entering my contest. It has been a delight hosting so many contests. If you like you can enjoy the hugs, I left all winning poems on my blog "I WILL BE FAITHFUL." link-------> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=18505&PoetID=18720 <----- Enjoy and stop by if you'd like...... Always & Forever ** LINDA
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January 2, 2014 at 2:15 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Samantha !! A very nice poem - :)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck !! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
A   Avatar
January 1, 2014 at 10:02 PM
Nicely said, Love is a night with shining armor... Dull as it gets at times... Love this one Samantha, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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January 1, 2014 at 8:48 PM
Samantha, Hope you are enjoying the new year 2014, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, i love this decaying addiction.. This is deep!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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January 1, 2014 at 7:27 PM
Wow a poem with venom, what a great talent you are well done. look forward to reading more. take care. Pete.
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