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Love of My Life

Your heart belongs to another, but how can i stay silent. There is no dance in my heart, when these eyes betray me. You know by now, I was born to love you, and you were born to me mine, but I wait decades. Don't worry my sweet friend, I will always love you and I will die crying your name, remember my silence. When I leave, stare at the stone with my name, all I ask is for a kiss each time you visit, because in my life, you did not present me with one.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/28/2018 7:44:00 AM
So heartfelt, heartbreaking, emotional and amazing poem. So moving and deep. -JWE
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Date: 5/20/2018 10:15:00 AM
This is a beautiful aching piece.
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Date: 4/4/2018 5:12:00 AM
Beautifully written. Full of mixed emotions and yet, thoughtful and very elegantly made. Thanks for sharing your poem on here. :) ~JWE
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Date: 3/31/2018 10:20:00 AM
Melancholy beautiful, Yazmin. Wonderful debut poem. Welcome to PSoup. This was a soul-stirring tasteful soup entree. Keep 'em coming. May love light your path in life always.
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Date: 3/29/2018 4:04:00 PM
Oh it s a really heartfelt and sad write, you have written this poem really nicely, you see that a incomplete love can destroy a person especially mentally, so what s best, try, try your best, but if he s not willing to, just go away, acknowledging that I really give my best, and then never think of that same person again because our mind is really mysterious, it created many beautiful memories and the realization always hurt us, knowing that all these things will never happen in real life
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Date: 3/29/2018 4:04:00 PM
Oh you have cut MY heart this time Yazmin! So very sad :(
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Date: 3/29/2018 1:23:00 PM
Hi Yasmin welcome to Soup It is a very beautiful love poem.....love has no bounds ......so is this in your write
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Date: 3/29/2018 1:24:00 AM
Welcome to PS Yasmin, and thank you for reading and commenting on mine....Maria
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Date: 3/28/2018 7:49:00 PM
A heart never loses its love for that particular one. And obviously, yours is stronger and sweeter... Welcome to PS Yazmin! I'm looking forward to read more of yours! Hugs :)
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Date: 3/28/2018 8:56:00 AM
Such beautiful, undying love Yazmin. A very sad first poem here :* Best, Judy
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Date: 3/28/2018 8:44:00 AM
Yazmin, a deep, dark and sad poem of beautifully expressed unrequited love and obsession.. Great imagery and emotion especially in your last three lines. Warmest wishes. ~Susan
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Date: 3/27/2018 5:24:00 PM
That's love...beyond compare...All the best
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Date: 3/27/2018 1:32:00 PM
You never know, if you keep waiting maybe one day you may get your guy! Nice to see you finally join, you can do better than this though and you know that... Welcome to Soup.
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Date: 3/29/2018 4:05:00 PM
Well dang S1! Where is that squinty eyed Emoji when I need it!?

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