Love Obsession

LOVE OBSESSION

You are an inspiration
For my heart
You have a captivation
In your eyes
Who’s that creepin’ by your window ?
Who’s that with an ear at your door ?
Is it love obsession ? Is it love obsession ?
Is it love obsession or is it me ?

You’ve got a smile that lights up
The night sky.
With a personality
Brighter still.
Who’s that sneekin’ by your doorway ?
Who’s that caught with a phony disguise ?
Is it love obsession ? Is it love obsession ?
Is it love obsession or is it me ?

I’m out of my mind and soul
With lustful passion.
I’ve got a need for something
I can’t have
Who’s that hiding in the shadows again ?
Who’s that trying to get a glimpse of your face ?
Is it love obsession ? Is it love obsession ?
Is it love obsession or is it me ?
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Perrin Avatar
October 13, 2019 at 7:32 AM
Fantastic emotive write :-) x
Capitano Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 8:00 AM
Thanks Elaine you are too kind. :)
Ajmal Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 7:49 AM
Such a beautiful written poem, believe me, it s really is a love obsession,anyway I really like the way you ve describe it, your feelings and emotions both were described really beautifully and clearly and that what a good poetry is about, been clear, good luck and may God bless you
Capitano Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 8:23 AM
Thanks Faraz for your lovely comments; its not easy to come to grips with personal demons, to see yourself the way others may perceive you. Namaste.
One Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 7:30 AM
Deep write Phil.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Capitano Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 8:36 PM
Thanks, interesting contest; never knew there were so many obsessed people like me, lol.
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 11, 2017 at 7:51 PM
Was that question ever answered? I found this to be an interesting poem. Did the creep ever leave? I like this poem.
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 14, 2017 at 12:07 PM
Thank you now I understand
Capitano Avatar
May 12, 2017 at 7:09 AM
No Darlene, the creep resides in all of us but mostly stays hidden; the answer to the other question is ME. Thanks for liking and commenting.
Sosnoski Avatar
May 10, 2017 at 4:43 PM
Hi, my name is Olivia. I am a student doing an english project that includes your poem and I need information regarding you. If you are willing to share it with me, I would like to know when you were born, what your current occupation is, and why you wrote this poem. Thank you so much.
Capitano Avatar
May 10, 2017 at 6:18 PM
Hi Olivia, I'm honoured that you chose one of my poems for your English project. I was born in 1953 in London, Canada and have been writing poetry, short stories and essays for 50 years. This poem is about loving someone so much it becomes an obsession and the 'creep' comes out. Currently I am the paint pro at Home Depot.
Ochwo-Oburu Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 3:27 AM
You see Capitano, your things can be addictive and killing softly! You are a story!
Capitano Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 6:21 AM
Indeed Solomon, love can be addictive and like all addictions, it can kill. Nice to hear from you and thanks for commenting.
Manassian Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 4:48 AM
LOVED THIS! Delightful in its entirety The questions remain....Sign of good poetry...keep the reader contemplating.
Capitano Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 7:14 AM
Thanks Eileen, many of my poems are open-ended questions. Glad you liked.
Bateman Avatar
March 29, 2017 at 6:12 PM
Hi Phil, Methinks at times that love and obsession can, may, and do go hand-in-hand. And I shan't forget as well the lustful passion part. This write is "Obsessive For Sure"!! Enjoyed it. Great Write!! Cheers, Gary
Mason Avatar
March 28, 2017 at 1:16 PM
Love it. Love is definitely obsessive!!
White Avatar
March 20, 2017 at 12:55 PM
Obsessive lyrics, this. Love this. In a good way :)
Dindi Avatar
March 18, 2017 at 8:46 AM
Damn man!!this is some obsessed guy over there!! Good staff!!
Capitano Avatar
March 19, 2017 at 7:10 AM
Thanks Jeff love is a lustful obsession. :)
Mac Avatar
March 17, 2017 at 12:25 PM
Very nicely penned Phil...I can relate to this. Regards Mick.
Solis Radius Avatar
March 16, 2017 at 3:42 AM
Love is POSITIVE obsession! Isn't it?? Rated 7!! Rita.
Dindi Avatar
March 18, 2017 at 8:47 AM
I agree Rita, one can't simply avoid getting obsessed with love!
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