Love Obsession

LOVE OBSESSION

You are an inspiration
For my heart
You have a captivation
In your eyes
Who’s that creepin’ by your window ?
Who’s that with an ear at your door ?
Is it love obsession ? Is it love obsession ?
Is it love obsession or is it me ?

You’ve got a smile that lights up
The night sky.
With a personality
Brighter still.
Who’s that sneekin’ by your doorway ?
Who’s that caught with a phony disguise ?
Is it love obsession ? Is it love obsession ?
Is it love obsession or is it me ?

I’m out of my mind and soul
With lustful passion.
I’ve got a need for something
I can’t have
Who’s that hiding in the shadows again ?
Who’s that trying to get a glimpse of your face ?
Is it love obsession ? Is it love obsession ?
Is it love obsession or is it me ?

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Date: 10/13/2019 7:32:00 AM
Fantastic emotive write :-) x
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Phil Capitano
Date: 10/14/2019 8:00:00 AM
Thanks Elaine you are too kind. :)
Date: 8/28/2017 7:49:00 AM
Such a beautiful written poem, believe me, it s really is a love obsession,anyway I really like the way you ve describe it, your feelings and emotions both were described really beautifully and clearly and that what a good poetry is about, been clear, good luck and may God bless you
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Phil Capitano
Date: 8/28/2017 8:23:00 AM
Thanks Faraz for your lovely comments; its not easy to come to grips with personal demons, to see yourself the way others may perceive you. Namaste.
Date: 7/27/2017 7:30:00 AM
Deep write Phil.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Phil Capitano
Date: 7/27/2017 8:36:00 PM
Thanks, interesting contest; never knew there were so many obsessed people like me, lol.
Date: 5/11/2017 7:51:00 PM
Was that question ever answered? I found this to be an interesting poem. Did the creep ever leave? I like this poem.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/14/2017 12:07:00 PM
Thank you now I understand
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Phil Capitano
Date: 5/12/2017 7:09:00 AM
No Darlene, the creep resides in all of us but mostly stays hidden; the answer to the other question is ME. Thanks for liking and commenting.
Date: 5/10/2017 4:43:00 PM
Hi, my name is Olivia. I am a student doing an english project that includes your poem and I need information regarding you. If you are willing to share it with me, I would like to know when you were born, what your current occupation is, and why you wrote this poem. Thank you so much.
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Phil Capitano
Date: 5/10/2017 6:18:00 PM
Hi Olivia, I'm honoured that you chose one of my poems for your English project. I was born in 1953 in London, Canada and have been writing poetry, short stories and essays for 50 years. This poem is about loving someone so much it becomes an obsession and the 'creep' comes out. Currently I am the paint pro at Home Depot.
Date: 5/3/2017 3:27:00 AM
You see Capitano, your things can be addictive and killing softly! You are a story!
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Phil Capitano
Date: 5/3/2017 6:21:00 AM
Indeed Solomon, love can be addictive and like all addictions, it can kill. Nice to hear from you and thanks for commenting.
Date: 4/7/2017 4:48:00 AM
LOVED THIS! Delightful in its entirety The questions remain....Sign of good poetry...keep the reader contemplating.
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Phil Capitano
Date: 4/7/2017 7:14:00 AM
Thanks Eileen, many of my poems are open-ended questions. Glad you liked.
Date: 3/29/2017 6:12:00 PM
Hi Phil, Methinks at times that love and obsession can, may, and do go hand-in-hand. And I shan't forget as well the lustful passion part. This write is "Obsessive For Sure"!! Enjoyed it. Great Write!! Cheers, Gary
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Date: 3/28/2017 1:16:00 PM
Love it. Love is definitely obsessive!!
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Date: 3/20/2017 12:55:00 PM
Obsessive lyrics, this. Love this. In a good way :)
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Date: 3/18/2017 8:46:00 AM
Damn man!!this is some obsessed guy over there!! Good staff!!
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Phil Capitano
Date: 3/19/2017 7:10:00 AM
Thanks Jeff love is a lustful obsession. :)
Date: 3/17/2017 12:25:00 PM
Very nicely penned Phil...I can relate to this. Regards Mick.
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Date: 3/16/2017 3:42:00 AM
Love is POSITIVE obsession! Isn't it?? Rated 7!! Rita.
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Jeff Dindi
Date: 3/18/2017 8:47:00 AM
I agree Rita, one can't simply avoid getting obsessed with love!
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