Connie Gildersleeve Poet Tanka

Love Note Wisdom

As love grows older,
we learn to bend-not to break,
our hearts mature but
when an argument flares up
silence and a cocktail helps.



For Rick Parise's contest, 'One Tanka - Theme Love Note'

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Harry Horsman June 22, 2013 at 3:45 AM Wow, you unlock many secrets here, and yes i too will follow your example,,, wonderful poetry Connie Gildersleeve June 22, 2013 at 5:05 PM Harry thank you for your delightful comment. It means a lot to me. Warm Smiles, Connie

Barbara Gorelick June 19, 2013 at 2:47 PM You got it just right! I find a glass of wine does wonders for softening the rough edges. Love it! BG Connie Gildersleeve June 21, 2013 at 4:12 PM Thanks Barb for your delightful comment. Wine is good too. Warm Smiles, Connie

Russell Sivey June 19, 2013 at 11:13 AM This is a wonderful and enlightening write my friend! You have expressed yourself perfectly with this delightful poem here Connie! What a spectacular piece, such an awesome poem, Great Work!! Connie Gildersleeve June 19, 2013 at 2:41 PM Russell thank you for stopping by and leaving a lovely comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie