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Love never fades

the morning air staggers above the lake
through trees, i almost feel it kissing me
my thoughts spiral down like leaves amidst fall
this emptiness is more than i can take
beneath closed eyes you are all that i see
yet emptiness haunts within morning's call





Sandy Adams
11/01/2013
SENSES FOR A SESTET 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/31/2017 8:46:00 PM
Sandy, where are YOU!! PLease if you see this, will you send me an email again!!! or soupmail me?
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Date: 6/11/2019 7:46:00 PM
I don’t get notifications from poetry soup and it won’t let me access my mailbox only poetry comments Been absent from here about 3 years
Date: 11/17/2013 4:10:00 PM
Lovely my lady of the written word, great job on this emotional work. also know he may sleep alot but he's not a vampire lol
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Date: 11/10/2013 11:08:00 PM
This make me sad..and isn't that the object ..to make us feel something...congrats on your success...BG
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/11/2013 6:41:00 PM
thank you...i thought lonely or sad would be easy emotions to convey :)
Date: 11/10/2013 9:24:00 AM
congrats on a fine win Sandra
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Date: 11/10/2013 4:18:00 PM
Thank you Joseph :) hugs
Date: 11/10/2013 6:13:00 AM
Excellent winning work..Enjoyed reading this one today..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 11/10/2013 4:19:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and wonderful comment :)
Date: 11/9/2013 7:06:00 PM
Wonderful piece,Sandra...Congrats on your superb win in this contest....Kudos to you,pal...
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Date: 11/10/2013 4:19:00 PM
Thank you my friend...have a great night :) hugs
Date: 11/9/2013 6:13:00 PM
I've seen almost all of them now. Yours remains one of my very favorites!!! Congrats on the winners list.
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Date: 11/10/2013 4:20:00 PM
Thank you Andrea... hugs :)
Date: 11/5/2013 1:19:00 PM
I dont think it dose just like memorries love your write tahnks for your kind words on mine xxx davidscott
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Date: 11/5/2013 6:06:00 PM
thank you for all your kind visits :) hugs
Date: 11/4/2013 10:09:00 AM
Every line beautifully crafted. From " The morning air staggers...my thoughts spiral down like leaves amidst fall---" every line is so totally alive as objects become living characters. Great work
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Date: 11/4/2013 11:13:00 AM
Thank you Karen...hugs :)
Date: 11/4/2013 2:54:00 AM
"This emptiness is more than I can take" my heart longed to give you a consoling embrace... Captivating!
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Date: 11/4/2013 11:12:00 AM
thank you Sarai...hugs :)
Date: 11/1/2013 11:39:00 PM
"Beautiful lines and i so love this poem...wonderful work:)"
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Date: 11/2/2013 7:36:00 AM
thank you so much for your kind words :)
Date: 11/1/2013 6:40:00 PM
I love your line, "my thoughts spiral down like leaves amidst fall". I could see everything as vividly as you described it. A beautiful, beautiful poem, Sandra! I think that I will be adding this one to my favorites!
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Date: 11/1/2013 8:49:00 PM
Thank you Kelly...it was windy here the past couple days and I love watching the leaves as they spiral downward...fall is always great inspiration! hugs :)
Date: 11/1/2013 6:11:00 PM
wow, that was the sestet, huh? I think it is one of the very best I have seen. I really need to try this one out. I have been saving my time for weekend but now I have so much school work, I still fear I have no time for poetry!!!
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Date: 11/1/2013 8:47:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, I am sure you will write a beauty for the contest...rhyme and you go well together :) hugs
Date: 11/1/2013 6:04:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative work..Reads like a winner to me..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for the visit to my page with congrats..Sara
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Date: 11/1/2013 8:46:00 PM
thank you Sara...been working on the wording of that poem all week...had little me time, so would write and save it and go back to it when I could :) hugs
Date: 11/1/2013 5:01:00 PM
beautifully crafted piece
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Date: 11/1/2013 5:08:00 PM
Thank you Liam :) have a good weekend! hugs
Date: 11/1/2013 4:48:00 PM
Beautiful loving poem, enjoyed a lot. Loved always, bl
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Date: 11/1/2013 5:08:00 PM
Thank you so much :)
Date: 11/1/2013 12:43:00 PM
- Lovely written Sandra .... but, feel like you need a warm hug !!! :) - Have a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/1/2013 5:08:00 PM
Thank you Anne_lise....Happy weekend :) hugs to you my sweet poetic friend!
Date: 11/1/2013 11:09:00 AM
C'est l'amour! Timeless.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/1/2013 11:12:00 AM
thank you :)