Sandra Adams Poet Rhyme

Love Never Fades

the morning air staggers above the lake
through trees, i almost feel it kissing me
my thoughts spiral down like leaves amidst fall
this emptiness is more than i can take
beneath closed eyes you are all that i see
yet emptiness haunts within morning's call





Sandy Adams
11/01/2013
SENSES FOR A SESTET

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Andrea Dietrich August 31, 2017 at 8:46 PM Sandy, where are YOU!! PLease if you see this, will you send me an email again!!! or soupmail me? Sandra Adams June 11, 2019 at 7:46 PM I don’t get notifications from poetry soup and it won’t let me access my mailbox only poetry comments Been absent from here about 3 years

Cherl Dunn November 17, 2013 at 4:10 PM Lovely my lady of the written word, great job on this emotional work. also know he may sleep alot but he's not a vampire lol

Barbara Gorelick November 10, 2013 at 11:08 PM This make me sad..and isn't that the object ..to make us feel something...congrats on your success...BG Sandra Adams November 11, 2013 at 6:41 PM thank you...i thought lonely or sad would be easy emotions to convey :)

Joseph May November 10, 2013 at 9:24 AM congrats on a fine win Sandra Sandra Adams November 10, 2013 at 4:18 PM Thank you Joseph :) hugs

Sara Kendrick November 10, 2013 at 6:13 AM Excellent winning work..Enjoyed reading this one today..Congrats..Sara Sandra Adams November 10, 2013 at 4:19 PM Thank you for your visit and wonderful comment :)

Olusegun Arowolo November 9, 2013 at 7:06 PM Wonderful piece,Sandra...Congrats on your superb win in this contest....Kudos to you,pal... Sandra Adams November 10, 2013 at 4:19 PM Thank you my friend...have a great night :) hugs

Andrea Dietrich November 9, 2013 at 6:13 PM I've seen almost all of them now. Yours remains one of my very favorites!!! Congrats on the winners list. Sandra Adams November 10, 2013 at 4:20 PM Thank you Andrea... hugs :)

David Scott November 5, 2013 at 1:19 PM I dont think it dose just like memorries love your write tahnks for your kind words on mine xxx davidscott Sandra Adams November 5, 2013 at 6:06 PM thank you for all your kind visits :) hugs

Karen Anglesey November 4, 2013 at 10:09 AM Every line beautifully crafted. From " The morning air staggers...my thoughts spiral down like leaves amidst fall---" every line is so totally alive as objects become living characters. Great work Sandra Adams November 4, 2013 at 11:13 AM Thank you Karen...hugs :)

Sarai Virden November 4, 2013 at 2:54 AM "This emptiness is more than I can take" my heart longed to give you a consoling embrace... Captivating! Sandra Adams November 4, 2013 at 11:12 AM thank you Sarai...hugs :)

Kelly Deschler November 1, 2013 at 6:40 PM I love your line, "my thoughts spiral down like leaves amidst fall". I could see everything as vividly as you described it. A beautiful, beautiful poem, Sandra! I think that I will be adding this one to my favorites! Sandra Adams November 1, 2013 at 8:49 PM Thank you Kelly...it was windy here the past couple days and I love watching the leaves as they spiral downward...fall is always great inspiration! hugs :)

Andrea Dietrich November 1, 2013 at 6:11 PM wow, that was the sestet, huh? I think it is one of the very best I have seen. I really need to try this one out. I have been saving my time for weekend but now I have so much school work, I still fear I have no time for poetry!!! Sandra Adams November 1, 2013 at 8:47 PM Thank you Andrea, I am sure you will write a beauty for the contest...rhyme and you go well together :) hugs

Sara Kendrick November 1, 2013 at 6:04 PM Enjoyed reading your creative work..Reads like a winner to me..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for the visit to my page with congrats..Sara Sandra Adams November 1, 2013 at 8:46 PM thank you Sara...been working on the wording of that poem all week...had little me time, so would write and save it and go back to it when I could :) hugs

Liam Mcdaid November 1, 2013 at 5:01 PM beautifully crafted piece Sandra Adams November 1, 2013 at 5:08 PM Thank you Liam :) have a good weekend! hugs

Bl Devnath November 1, 2013 at 4:48 PM Beautiful loving poem, enjoyed a lot. Loved always, bl Sandra Adams November 1, 2013 at 5:08 PM Thank you so much :)

Anne-Lise Andresen November 1, 2013 at 12:43 PM - Lovely written Sandra .... but, feel like you need a warm hug !!! :) - Have a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Sandra Adams November 1, 2013 at 5:08 PM Thank you Anne_lise....Happy weekend :) hugs to you my sweet poetic friend!

Gerald Kithinji November 1, 2013 at 11:09 AM C'est l'amour! Timeless. Sandra Adams November 1, 2013 at 11:12 AM thank you :)