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Love My Way

Love, you have given me nothing but pain,
Heartache, sleepless nights and loneliness,
Why do you make me suffer so?
My days are dour and nights grim,
I cannot breathe easy;
Did I do you wrong?
Tell me but once,
Oh, why me?
I ask,
Why?
I, 
who have
loved you so,
I want nothing
of this world's riches
But to love and be loved,
Song on my lips and blue sky,
And I have hope and faith in love,
I am not ready to turn my back
For I know love will come my way again!

Contest Entry: Double reverse Etheree of Shadow Hamilton
Date: 09/19/2014

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Date: 10/4/2014 3:58:00 AM
Lovely to read, congratulations.
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Abdul Malik
Date: 10/4/2014 10:47:00 AM
It was lovely to write too. Thanks.
Date: 10/4/2014 1:49:00 AM
Nice write on love, congrats on the win, Abdulk
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Date: 10/3/2014 11:29:00 PM
WEll done, Abdul. Congrats to you!
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Date: 10/3/2014 8:44:00 PM
Nicely done Abdul. Congratulations on your first place.
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Date: 10/3/2014 7:50:00 PM
Congratulations, Abdul. Great aspiration.
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Date: 10/3/2014 6:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win.
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Date: 10/3/2014 6:17:00 PM
So very beautiful Abdul. I love this so much and am glad you don't give up.
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Abdul Malik
Date: 10/4/2014 10:36:00 AM
It's hard to give up on "LOVE". Otherwise, there will be nothing left to live for. Glad you liked it.
Date: 10/3/2014 6:06:00 PM
so romantic and great flow Abdul congrats on 1st place and ty for your support hugs
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Abdul Malik
Date: 10/4/2014 10:34:00 AM
Thanks a lot. Glad you liked it.
Date: 10/3/2014 5:55:00 PM
Beautifully crafted Etheree many congrats on your top spot:-) Hugs jan xx
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Abdul Malik
Date: 10/4/2014 10:32:00 AM
Thanks Jan.
Date: 9/19/2014 9:21:00 PM
This is amazing, the form is great, but the poem it self in any form is great!
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Abdul Malik
Date: 9/20/2014 10:44:00 AM
Glad you like it. Thanks much for your comments.