Abdul Malik Mandani Poet Etheree

Love My Way

Love, you have given me nothing but pain,
Heartache, sleepless nights and loneliness,
Why do you make me suffer so?
My days are dour and nights grim,
I cannot breathe easy;
Did I do you wrong?
Tell me but once,
Oh, why me?
I ask,
Why?
I, 
who have
loved you so,
I want nothing
of this world's riches
But to love and be loved,
Song on my lips and blue sky,
And I have hope and faith in love,
I am not ready to turn my back
For I know love will come my way again!

Contest Entry: Double reverse Etheree of Shadow Hamilton
Date: 09/19/2014

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Margaret Foster October 4, 2014 at 3:58 AM Lovely to read, congratulations. Abdul Malik Mandani October 4, 2014 at 10:47 AM It was lovely to write too. Thanks.

Dr.Ram Mehta October 4, 2014 at 1:49 AM Nice write on love, congrats on the win, Abdulk

Andrea Dietrich October 3, 2014 at 11:29 PM WEll done, Abdul. Congrats to you!

Joyce Johnson October 3, 2014 at 8:44 PM Nicely done Abdul. Congratulations on your first place.

Faye Gibson October 3, 2014 at 7:50 PM Congratulations, Abdul. Great aspiration.

Maurice Yvonne October 3, 2014 at 6:43 PM Congratulations on your first place win.

Brenda Meier-Hans October 3, 2014 at 6:17 PM So very beautiful Abdul. I love this so much and am glad you don't give up. Abdul Malik Mandani October 4, 2014 at 10:36 AM It's hard to give up on "LOVE". Otherwise, there will be nothing left to live for. Glad you liked it.

Shadow Hamilton October 3, 2014 at 6:06 PM so romantic and great flow Abdul congrats on 1st place and ty for your support hugs Abdul Malik Mandani October 4, 2014 at 10:34 AM Thanks a lot. Glad you liked it.

Jan Allison October 3, 2014 at 5:55 PM Beautifully crafted Etheree many congrats on your top spot:-) Hugs jan xx Abdul Malik Mandani October 4, 2014 at 10:32 AM Thanks Jan.

Arthur Vaso September 19, 2014 at 9:21 PM This is amazing, the form is great, but the poem it self in any form is great! Abdul Malik Mandani September 20, 2014 at 10:44 AM Glad you like it. Thanks much for your comments.