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Love: My Hearts Love Letter

Straight up, straight down, then back to the middle, 
All with a musical voice,
Dressed in red, for fire and blood, 
Creating the most beautiful noise,

Like that of a drum, the slow thumping drum, 
The hypnotically traditional song,
He creates a rhythm we both can live by, 
With a chorus where we both belong,

And my favourite bit is when he jumps in the air, 
He pulls all of me out of my seat,
It happens whenever I look to your smile, 
It’s as though he just misses a beat,

He’s my zigzagging line forever weaving a course, 
He’s my honest and reliable friend,
Who wants to hold you my beautiful girl, 
Hold you right up to the end.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Nicole Avatar
March 18, 2020 at 8:53 PM
Awe.. this is so beautiful and romantic. When the heart flutters, it is a wonderful feeling indeed. Love surrounds you. :) Brandy
Raynes Avatar
March 19, 2020 at 8:21 PM
Hi Brandy, when our hearts miss a beat is love, when the beats magnify it's love. thanks for your thoughts :)
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