Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Lyric

Love Me Not, Love Me More

LOVE ME NOT, LOVE ME MORE

Love me not, love me more
Love me now until forevermore...
    Gaze meet, nothing much to miss
    Hot nerves shoot in happy bliss
 Clouds above grin in delight
    so with sunshine golden light.

Love me not, love me more
Love me now until forevermore...
    You hold my hand to yours
       clasping it tight, not letting go
    Through all tears and all joys
       let affection a river overflow...

Love me not, love me more..
Love me now 'til forevermore...
    Partners, we sing... sing along
       uncaring who can hear the song
    Irrigating our veins with a wish of love
       peacefully settled like a rock dove

Love me not, Love me more
Love me now 'til forevermore...
     Yes! that's we both want to hear
         from honeyed lips of someone dear.
      Touch my face, stroke my hair
          speak sweet, tell only my name.

Love me not, love me more
Love me now 'til forevermore..
      Until all the mountains reach the skies
            or the moon kiss the starlight shine
      Should all the rosebud hurry blush
            or the painter's brush draw in rush..

Love me not love me more
Love me now 'til forevermore...
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11:21pm, August 29, 2014

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Skat A November 5, 2015 at 12:05 PM Olive, congrats on your win in Rob Carmack's contest. SKAT

Dr. Upma A. Sharma November 4, 2015 at 9:39 PM Congrats on huge win dear Olive with this superb write!

Teddy Kimathi November 4, 2015 at 3:58 AM Beautiful!!!!! Congrats Olive! ;-)

Jason Conley October 30, 2014 at 6:50 AM Beautiful composition and flow :) Well done! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 30, 2014 at 10:01 AM thanks much!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 8, 2014 at 4:17 AM You the only one who observe that Justin..:) that extremes I tried to portray..:) thanks much..:)

Justin Bordner September 7, 2014 at 1:16 PM Exquisite love, I love it! There is such a sweet riddle in the beautiful "Love me not love me more, love me now till forevermore", reminds of natural love's extremes and It's refusal to surrender Olive. " Irrigating our veins with a wish of love..." special! I'm so glad I read this beauty today...J.A.B. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 10, 2015 at 11:51 AM This a late thank you for your generous remarks on my poem Justin..

Paul Callus September 1, 2014 at 10:51 AM This is very lovely Olive_eloi. Through simple wishes you ask for beautiful love to grow and flourish. Now, who could be worthy of calling your name with love and affection?! hugs // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 2, 2014 at 5:40 AM I really don't know who Paul.. How I wish, i hope and i pray soon sooon i ll know.. :)) God;s will be done.. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen August 31, 2014 at 5:44 AM - Dear Olive, oh .... this is really a beautiful poem !!! - Love is the whole life, the whole flower, the whole fruit ..... EVERYTHING !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 31, 2014 at 8:32 AM Thanks much Anne Lise for the drop by..:) thanks for the support sorry for not replying immediately..:( GBU

Verlena S. Walker August 30, 2014 at 11:40 PM Beautiful Olive and an awesome write. Verlena Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 30, 2014 at 11:42 PM Thank you Verlena for this drop by..:) GBU

James Fraser August 30, 2014 at 5:13 PM Delightful warm poetry, oozing feelings of a wanting tomorrow, love me more, no sorrow - James :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 30, 2014 at 11:42 PM Thank you James..:) really appreciate your drop by..:)

Tim Smith August 29, 2014 at 1:05 PM How beautiful Olive...I am sensing some true feelings here.....could it be :)....hugs Tim Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 30, 2014 at 2:17 AM not really Tim.. still am praying and still am weighing things up.. don;t want to be in a hurry .

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 29, 2014 at 10:37 AM Oh Olive this is such a lovely write dear! Love all the beautiful simile packed verses especially the first one! Amazing work! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 30, 2014 at 2:16 AM Thanks much DR. Upma.. :) I appreciate you still dropping by.. am sorry i have not been here to reply immediately.. God bless you.. :)