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Love Me Not, Love Me More

LOVE ME NOT, LOVE ME MORE

Love me not, love me more
Love me now until forevermore...
    Gaze meet, nothing much to miss
    Hot nerves shoot in happy bliss
 Clouds above grin in delight
    so with sunshine golden light.

Love me not, love me more
Love me now until forevermore...
    You hold my hand to yours
       clasping it tight, not letting go
    Through all tears and all joys
       let affection a river overflow...

Love me not, love me more..
Love me now 'til forevermore...
    Partners, we sing... sing along
       uncaring who can hear the song
    Irrigating our veins with a wish of love
       peacefully settled like a rock dove

Love me not, Love me more
Love me now 'til forevermore...
     Yes! that's we both want to hear
         from honeyed lips of someone dear.
      Touch my face, stroke my hair
          speak sweet, tell only my name.

Love me not, love me more
Love me now 'til forevermore..
      Until all the mountains reach the skies
            or the moon kiss the starlight shine
      Should all the rosebud hurry blush
            or the painter's brush draw in rush..

Love me not love me more
Love me now 'til forevermore...
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11:21pm, August 29, 2014

Copyright © Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser | Year Posted 2014

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Skat A Date: 11/5/2015 12:05:00 PM Olive, congrats on your win in Rob Carmack's contest. SKAT Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 11/4/2015 9:39:00 PM Congrats on huge win dear Olive with this superb write! Login to Reply

Teddy Kimathi Date: 11/4/2015 3:58:00 AM Beautiful!!!!! Congrats Olive! ;-) Login to Reply

Jason Conley Date: 10/30/2014 6:50:00 AM Beautiful composition and flow :) Well done! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 10/30/2014 10:01:00 AM thanks much!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/8/2014 4:17:00 AM You the only one who observe that Justin..:) that extremes I tried to portray..:) thanks much..:) Login to Reply

Justin Bordner Date: 9/7/2014 1:16:00 PM Exquisite love, I love it! There is such a sweet riddle in the beautiful "Love me not love me more, love me now till forevermore", reminds of natural love's extremes and It's refusal to surrender Olive. " Irrigating our veins with a wish of love..." special! I'm so glad I read this beauty today...J.A.B. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 7/10/2015 11:51:00 AM This a late thank you for your generous remarks on my poem Justin..

Paul Callus Date: 9/1/2014 10:51:00 AM This is very lovely Olive_eloi. Through simple wishes you ask for beautiful love to grow and flourish. Now, who could be worthy of calling your name with love and affection?! hugs // paul Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/2/2014 5:40:00 AM I really don't know who Paul.. How I wish, i hope and i pray soon sooon i ll know.. :)) God;s will be done.. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/31/2014 5:44:00 AM - Dear Olive, oh .... this is really a beautiful poem !!! - Love is the whole life, the whole flower, the whole fruit ..... EVERYTHING !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 8/31/2014 8:32:00 AM Thanks much Anne Lise for the drop by..:) thanks for the support sorry for not replying immediately..:( GBU

Verlena S. Walker Date: 8/30/2014 11:40:00 PM Beautiful Olive and an awesome write. Verlena Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 8/30/2014 11:42:00 PM Thank you Verlena for this drop by..:) GBU

James Fraser Date: 8/30/2014 5:13:00 PM Delightful warm poetry, oozing feelings of a wanting tomorrow, love me more, no sorrow - James :) Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 8/30/2014 11:42:00 PM Thank you James..:) really appreciate your drop by..:)

Tim Smith Date: 8/29/2014 1:05:00 PM How beautiful Olive...I am sensing some true feelings here.....could it be :)....hugs Tim Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 8/30/2014 2:17:00 AM not really Tim.. still am praying and still am weighing things up.. don;t want to be in a hurry .

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 8/29/2014 10:37:00 AM Oh Olive this is such a lovely write dear! Love all the beautiful simile packed verses especially the first one! Amazing work! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 8/30/2014 2:16:00 AM Thanks much DR. Upma.. :) I appreciate you still dropping by.. am sorry i have not been here to reply immediately.. God bless you.. :)