Love Me Like You Mean It

Where gilded autumn dazzles hazy morning
And golden leaves sprinkle on marigold beams
As sparrows dance and hummingbirds sing
Amble in my shadows on blue river’s prairies.

Tell me treacly secrets of whispering winds
Befriending sweet nectar on butterfly wings
When you hear me in lyrics of heartbeats
And sing me the hymns, in verses of dreams.

When twilight paints blush of the evening
Flirting with tangerine sunset on skyline pink 
Sprinkling gold-dust on pulsating ripples
Show me the amber sun dipping in water.

Watching the night sky in symphony of stars
As sensuous flames ignite echoes of romance
Caress my desires in embrace of your heart
And compose me playfully in intimate allegory.

When I want to hear it, tell me you need me
Be my spring season, when my winter haunts me
Be my only reason, if you say you love me
Say it like it’s pure love, say it like you mean it.

December 3, 2019
Poem of the day on December 5, 2019
Placed first: Strand select contest 1 by Brian Strand
Love me like you mean it poetry contest
Sponsor: Julie Leigh Rodeheaver
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Crabtree Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 6:29 PM
"Say it like you mean it" should be the final words to her. Hopefully, she will listen :)
Ibeh Avatar
January 21, 2020 at 4:14 PM
Wow, I can't believe this wonderful poem didn't place in Julie's contest, Vijay. Glad to see that it rightfully won 1st place in Brian's contest, not to mention p.o.t.d.!
Roper Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 9:06 PM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand’s contest. Hugs Eve
Riabi Dziri Avatar
December 9, 2019 at 8:22 AM
You meant your words.. pure and genuine feel wrapped in a unique imagery.. allowing Nature to speak its very heart.. Every single beauty is true like it is meant to be! A huge wow for such a great work! Meant to be honoured and recognised.. Congratulations, dear Vijay, on your POTD acknowledgement! My warmest wishes and regards. Blessings.
Pandit Avatar
December 10, 2019 at 7:47 AM
A pleasure, as always, to read your comments--much appreciate, Besma-- many many thanks. Regards.
Gauthier Avatar
December 9, 2019 at 7:47 AM
Lovely, Vijay. Congrats on your POTD.
Pandit Avatar
December 10, 2019 at 7:47 AM
Thank you Line--much appreciate.
One Avatar
December 8, 2019 at 7:44 AM
this would be a perfect love if we were loved sincerely... congrats on potd my friend..
Pandit Avatar
December 8, 2019 at 2:09 PM
Much appreciate, SO--many thanks my friend.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
December 8, 2019 at 6:57 AM
Yeah, this is poetic gold, VJ! GrEaT lines throughout ... Tell me treacly secrets of whispering winds Befriending sweet nectar on butterfly wings When you hear me in lyrics of heartbeats And sing me the hymns, in verses of dreams. Kudos on POTD. Stellar bright write! Love and more love always. RomWar
Pandit Avatar
December 8, 2019 at 2:09 PM
Appreciate the glowing comments my friend--many thanks.
Kannan Avatar
December 7, 2019 at 7:55 AM
Oh wow! A big Congratulations on your POTD. Well deserved
Pandit Avatar
December 7, 2019 at 3:56 PM
Much appreciate Supraja--many thanks.
Kannan Avatar
December 7, 2019 at 7:53 AM
Wow wow wow... WOW, this is so beautiful!!! Definitely a winner.
Pandit Avatar
December 7, 2019 at 3:57 PM
Many thanks Supraja.
Rose  Avatar
December 6, 2019 at 10:41 PM
Your poem echoes of beauty and romance, with a touch of pure love incorporated . Winning wishes dear Vijay
Pandit Avatar
December 7, 2019 at 6:57 AM
Thank you Pixie--much appreciate.
Anish Avatar
December 6, 2019 at 7:26 PM
Good luck in the contest - very nice imagery in this poem! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Pandit Avatar
December 7, 2019 at 6:58 AM
Much appreciate Matthew--many thanks.
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 6, 2019 at 2:48 AM
You have outdone yourself with this gorgeous romantic entry Vijay! Congratulations on your very deserving honor of POTD! : ) xxoo
Pandit Avatar
December 6, 2019 at 2:35 PM
That is so special coming from you Connie--much appreciate the kind remarks--many thanks.
Proxenos Avatar
December 6, 2019 at 1:34 AM
Back with congratulations on your fantastic POTD. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Pandit Avatar
December 6, 2019 at 2:34 PM
Much appreciate the return visit Jennifer--many thanks.
Somadas Avatar
December 6, 2019 at 12:22 AM
The concinnity of your poem is great..I wonder which is more beautiful, nature or the poem.. Fav again..
Pandit Avatar
December 6, 2019 at 2:33 PM
So kind of you Jenish--much appreciate your kind remarks--many thanks. A special thank you for the FAVE.
Nicole Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 9:41 PM
There is something magical about this poem. I knew it the moment I read it. Your words always touch my heart, in some way. Congratulations Vijay, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
Pandit Avatar
December 6, 2019 at 2:32 PM
Thank you for the return visit--always a joy to read your comments--many thanks, Brandy.
Messina Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 7:47 PM
Beautiful poetry Vijay. Congratulations on POTD.
Pandit Avatar
December 6, 2019 at 2:32 PM
Thank you Charles--much appreciate.
La France Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 6:44 PM
Vijay congratulations on your POTD with this wonderful poem!
Pandit Avatar
December 6, 2019 at 2:31 PM
Much appreciate Dear Heart--many thanks.
Na Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 3:39 PM
Congrats Vijay on POTD. :)
Pandit Avatar
December 6, 2019 at 2:31 PM
Thank you Gregory--much appreciate.
Sands Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 3:14 PM
Congratulations for POTD Vijay! I love the last stanza too :)
Pandit Avatar
December 6, 2019 at 2:30 PM
Much appreciate Heidi--many thanks.
Andresen Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 1:25 PM
- A wonderful poem, Vijay - I love this line: "Be my spring season, when my winter haunts me" - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. and best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
December 6, 2019 at 2:30 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise--much appreciate.
Adams Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 12:11 PM
wow... this is amazing Vijay...so much beauty woven within this well crafted poem...i am sure this one will shine at the top, gorgeous and so deserving of the POTD honor...congratulations my friend...i am in awe of your talent yet again... hugs
Pandit Avatar
December 6, 2019 at 2:29 PM
Thank you my friend--always a joy to read your comments--much appreciate.
Wanter Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 10:52 AM
Such sweet readable poetry! Congratulations!
Pandit Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 11:27 AM
Thank you for the kind remarks--much appreciate SW.
Warrior Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 9:04 AM
We love you...we love you lol...great job my romantic friend...and congrats!! on POTD!! Vijay...^WW^ :o)
Pandit Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 11:27 AM
Thank you WW--always a pleasure--many thanks.
Canerdy Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 8:34 AM
It's easy to see why this one got POTD! Superb, Vijay! Janice
Pandit Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 11:26 AM
That is so very kind of you--much appreciate Janice--many thanks.
Michael Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 8:33 AM
Say it for real...Congratulations Vijay on POTD...
Pandit Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 11:25 AM
Much appreciate Arturo--many thanks.
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