Love Me Like You Mean It

Where gilded autumn dazzles hazy morning
And golden leaves sprinkle on marigold beams
As sparrows dance and hummingbirds sing
Amble in my shadows on blue river’s prairies.

Tell me treacly secrets of whispering winds
Befriending sweet nectar on butterfly wings
When you hear me in lyrics of heartbeats
And sing me the hymns, in verses of dreams.

When twilight paints blush of the evening
Flirting with tangerine sunset on skyline pink 
Sprinkling gold-dust on pulsating ripples
Show me the amber sun dipping in water.

Watching the night sky in symphony of stars
As sensuous flames ignite echoes of romance
Caress my desires in embrace of your heart
And compose me playfully in intimate allegory.

When I want to hear it, tell me you need me
Be my spring season, when my winter haunts me
Be my only reason, if you say you love me
Say it like it’s pure love, say it like you mean it.

December 3, 2019
Poem of the day on December 5, 2019
Placed first: Strand select contest 1 by Brian Strand
Love me like you mean it poetry contest
Sponsor: Julie Leigh Rodeheaver

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Date: 11/5/2020 6:29:00 PM
"Say it like you mean it" should be the final words to her. Hopefully, she will listen :)
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Date: 1/21/2020 4:14:00 PM
Wow, I can't believe this wonderful poem didn't place in Julie's contest, Vijay. Glad to see that it rightfully won 1st place in Brian's contest, not to mention p.o.t.d.!
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Date: 1/4/2020 9:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand’s contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 12/9/2019 8:22:00 AM
You meant your words.. pure and genuine feel wrapped in a unique imagery.. allowing Nature to speak its very heart.. Every single beauty is true like it is meant to be! A huge wow for such a great work! Meant to be honoured and recognised.. Congratulations, dear Vijay, on your POTD acknowledgement! My warmest wishes and regards. Blessings.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/10/2019 7:47:00 AM
A pleasure, as always, to read your comments--much appreciate, Besma-- many many thanks. Regards.
Date: 12/9/2019 7:47:00 AM
Lovely, Vijay. Congrats on your POTD.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/10/2019 7:47:00 AM
Thank you Line--much appreciate.
Date: 12/8/2019 7:44:00 AM
this would be a perfect love if we were loved sincerely... congrats on potd my friend..
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Date: 12/8/2019 2:09:00 PM
Much appreciate, SO--many thanks my friend.
Date: 12/8/2019 6:57:00 AM
Yeah, this is poetic gold, VJ! GrEaT lines throughout ... Tell me treacly secrets of whispering winds Befriending sweet nectar on butterfly wings When you hear me in lyrics of heartbeats And sing me the hymns, in verses of dreams. Kudos on POTD. Stellar bright write! Love and more love always. RomWar
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/8/2019 2:09:00 PM
Appreciate the glowing comments my friend--many thanks.
Date: 12/7/2019 7:55:00 AM
Oh wow! A big Congratulations on your POTD. Well deserved
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/7/2019 3:56:00 PM
Much appreciate Supraja--many thanks.
Date: 12/7/2019 7:53:00 AM
Wow wow wow... WOW, this is so beautiful!!! Definitely a winner.
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Date: 12/7/2019 3:57:00 PM
Many thanks Supraja.
Date: 12/6/2019 10:41:00 PM
Your poem echoes of beauty and romance, with a touch of pure love incorporated . Winning wishes dear Vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/7/2019 6:57:00 AM
Thank you Pixie--much appreciate.
Date: 12/6/2019 7:26:00 PM
Good luck in the contest - very nice imagery in this poem! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 12/7/2019 6:58:00 AM
Much appreciate Matthew--many thanks.
Date: 12/6/2019 2:48:00 AM
You have outdone yourself with this gorgeous romantic entry Vijay! Congratulations on your very deserving honor of POTD! : ) xxoo
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/6/2019 2:35:00 PM
That is so special coming from you Connie--much appreciate the kind remarks--many thanks.
Date: 12/6/2019 1:34:00 AM
Back with congratulations on your fantastic POTD. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/6/2019 2:34:00 PM
Much appreciate the return visit Jennifer--many thanks.
Date: 12/6/2019 12:22:00 AM
The concinnity of your poem is great..I wonder which is more beautiful, nature or the poem.. Fav again..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/6/2019 2:33:00 PM
So kind of you Jenish--much appreciate your kind remarks--many thanks. A special thank you for the FAVE.
Date: 12/5/2019 9:41:00 PM
There is something magical about this poem. I knew it the moment I read it. Your words always touch my heart, in some way. Congratulations Vijay, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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Date: 12/6/2019 2:32:00 PM
Thank you for the return visit--always a joy to read your comments--many thanks, Brandy.
Date: 12/5/2019 7:47:00 PM
Beautiful poetry Vijay. Congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 12/6/2019 2:32:00 PM
Thank you Charles--much appreciate.
Date: 12/5/2019 6:44:00 PM
Vijay congratulations on your POTD with this wonderful poem!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/6/2019 2:31:00 PM
Much appreciate Dear Heart--many thanks.
Date: 12/5/2019 3:39:00 PM
Congrats Vijay on POTD. :)
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Date: 12/6/2019 2:31:00 PM
Thank you Gregory--much appreciate.
Date: 12/5/2019 3:14:00 PM
Congratulations for POTD Vijay! I love the last stanza too :)
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Date: 12/6/2019 2:30:00 PM
Much appreciate Heidi--many thanks.
Date: 12/5/2019 1:25:00 PM
- A wonderful poem, Vijay - I love this line: "Be my spring season, when my winter haunts me" - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. and best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/6/2019 2:30:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise--much appreciate.
Date: 12/5/2019 12:11:00 PM
wow... this is amazing Vijay...so much beauty woven within this well crafted poem...i am sure this one will shine at the top, gorgeous and so deserving of the POTD honor...congratulations my friend...i am in awe of your talent yet again... hugs
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Date: 12/6/2019 2:29:00 PM
Thank you my friend--always a joy to read your comments--much appreciate.
Date: 12/5/2019 10:52:00 AM
Such sweet readable poetry! Congratulations!
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Date: 12/5/2019 11:27:00 AM
Thank you for the kind remarks--much appreciate SW.
Date: 12/5/2019 9:04:00 AM
We love you...we love you lol...great job my romantic friend...and congrats!! on POTD!! Vijay...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 12/5/2019 11:27:00 AM
Thank you WW--always a pleasure--many thanks.
Date: 12/5/2019 8:34:00 AM
It's easy to see why this one got POTD! Superb, Vijay! Janice
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Date: 12/5/2019 11:26:00 AM
That is so very kind of you--much appreciate Janice--many thanks.
Date: 12/5/2019 8:33:00 AM
Say it for real...Congratulations Vijay on POTD...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/5/2019 11:25:00 AM
Much appreciate Arturo--many thanks.
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