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Love Me Like You Mean It

Feathered touch from your warm gentle hands Tickling my silky thoughts make me understand Goosebumps race down my trembling spine Electrifying anticipation emotions so divine Read my body as you whisper in hushed loving tones You see my heart holds all my delicious pleasure zones Let our hearts race in unison playing catch up to our breath Take me to places unknown Waltz me close to death Make my body turn traitor and commit sweet treason Let love vibrate through us without any rhyme or reason Love me like I need to be loved love me like you mean it Excite my mind and body, show me that you need it
1st place Contest;STRAND SPECIAL 8, Sponsor:Brian Strand Contest: Love Me Like You Mean It Poetry Sponsored by: Julie Leigh Rodeheaver Date:11/30/2019

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Date: 1/20/2020 1:19:00 PM
congratulations on your win Brenda :)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/20/2020 9:52:00 PM
Thank you sandy!;) I appreciate your visit!;)
Date: 12/25/2019 6:38:00 AM
BIT CONGRATS to win TOP
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/25/2019 8:32:00 AM
Anissa thank you so much!;)
Date: 12/24/2019 10:45:00 PM
Nice passionate poem. Congratulations on your win!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/24/2019 11:24:00 PM
Thank you!;)
Date: 12/24/2019 1:56:00 PM
Yeah, this is kinda hot, Brenda--you got an old man's heart racing!3 great lines in a row, with '...waltz me close to death... and the next 2--congrats on yr 1st place.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/24/2019 4:00:00 PM
LJ lol thank you so much! So the heart is working fine then? Haha! That was cute to say! ;)
Date: 12/24/2019 8:24:00 AM
Wow, Bren, you write sensual so well. Congrats on your win. Merry Christmas my friend. Hugs, John
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/24/2019 9:46:00 AM
Merry Xmas John! Congrats to you too my friend! And thank you so much!;)
Date: 12/5/2019 5:49:00 AM
Sensuously done, wow for me!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/5/2019 8:08:00 AM
Lol thank you Caren so much!)
Date: 12/1/2019 12:22:00 PM
beautifully penned... you do sensual well! :) best wishes in the contest...
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/3/2019 8:13:00 AM
Sandy you are too sweet! You my friend can do it too yours are amazing!;) thank you so much!;)
Date: 12/1/2019 9:23:00 AM
Very impressive write Brenda, no need for luck, this is a surefire winner!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/3/2019 8:12:00 AM
Thank you so much John! Hearing you say these things make feel like I am improving and that's great!;) thx again!;)
Date: 12/1/2019 1:19:00 AM
Very beautiful! I drifted away with each line because the imagery was so tender lovely!!!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/1/2019 2:08:00 AM
Ahh thank you G I'm so happy you enjoyed it!;) it was fun writing it!;)

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