Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

Love Me Like You Mean It

Feathered touch from 
your warm gentle hands
Tickling my silky thoughts 
make me understand
Goosebumps race down 
my trembling spine
Electrifying anticipation 
emotions so divine
Read my body as you whisper
in hushed loving tones
You see my heart holds all
my delicious pleasure zones
Let our hearts race in unison 
playing catch up to our breath
Take me to places unknown
Waltz me close to death
Make my body turn traitor
and commit sweet treason
Let love vibrate through us 
without any rhyme or reason 
Love me like I need to be loved
love me like you mean it
Excite my mind and body, 
show me that you need it


1st place
Contest;STRAND SPECIAL 8,
Sponsor:Brian Strand


Contest: Love Me Like You Mean It Poetry
Sponsored by: Julie Leigh Rodeheaver 
Date:11/30/2019

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Sandra Adams January 20, 2020 at 1:19 PM congratulations on your win Brenda :) Brenda Chiri January 20, 2020 at 9:52 PM Thank you sandy!;) I appreciate your visit!;)

Anisha Dutta December 25, 2019 at 6:38 AM BIT CONGRATS to win TOP Brenda Chiri December 25, 2019 at 8:32 AM Anissa thank you so much!;)

Juliet Ligon December 24, 2019 at 10:45 PM Nice passionate poem. Congratulations on your win! Brenda Chiri December 24, 2019 at 11:24 PM Thank you!;)

L. J. Carber December 24, 2019 at 1:56 PM Yeah, this is kinda hot, Brenda--you got an old man's heart racing!3 great lines in a row, with '...waltz me close to death... and the next 2--congrats on yr 1st place. Brenda Chiri December 24, 2019 at 4:00 PM LJ lol thank you so much! So the heart is working fine then? Haha! That was cute to say! ;)

John Gondolf December 24, 2019 at 8:24 AM Wow, Bren, you write sensual so well. Congrats on your win. Merry Christmas my friend. Hugs, John Brenda Chiri December 24, 2019 at 9:46 AM Merry Xmas John! Congrats to you too my friend! And thank you so much!;)

Caren Krutsinger December 5, 2019 at 5:49 AM Sensuously done, wow for me! Brenda Chiri December 5, 2019 at 8:08 AM Lol thank you Caren so much!)

Sandra Adams December 1, 2019 at 12:22 PM beautifully penned... you do sensual well! :) best wishes in the contest... Brenda Chiri December 3, 2019 at 8:13 AM Sandy you are too sweet! You my friend can do it too yours are amazing!;) thank you so much!;)

John Hamilton December 1, 2019 at 9:23 AM Very impressive write Brenda, no need for luck, this is a surefire winner! Brenda Chiri December 3, 2019 at 8:12 AM Thank you so much John! Hearing you say these things make feel like I am improving and that's great!;) thx again!;)

Pace Ink-U-Script December 1, 2019 at 1:19 AM Very beautiful! I drifted away with each line because the imagery was so tender lovely!!! Brenda Chiri December 1, 2019 at 2:08 AM Ahh thank you G I'm so happy you enjoyed it!;) it was fun writing it!;)