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"You can't blame gravity for falling in love", Albert Einstein

 

Would you love me if I was not a poet, If my words did not flow, if I did not know it? If my verses did not dance, like leaves in the breeze, Would you still cherish me, just as you please? In verses of love, I penned my dreams, My darling believed it was mere whimsical schemes, She urged me to clasp her tender hand, To feel love's enchantment, no need for poems' strands. If I could not paint pictures with words on a page, If my stories did not ignite a creative blaze, If my heart did not bleed ink, with each heartfelt line, Would your love for me, like a star, still brightly shine? In a world where love is found without poet or poem, Meeting of eyes sparks a radiant, eternal home, Smiles reach deep, their gentle art, I do not need to be a bard to secure your heart. For beyond the words, beyond the poetic art, Resides a soul, a beating, loving heart, And though my verses may falter, my muse may depart, My love for you, dear, will forever impart.

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Date: 9/13/2023 1:26:00 PM
A lovely poem, especially the ending.. Thanks for writing and congratulations on your placement.
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Date: 9/13/2023 6:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place with this one, Jay.
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Jay Narain
Date: 9/13/2023 11:05:00 AM
Thanks. Trying.
Date: 9/2/2023 9:20:00 PM
Lovely penning ! One needn't be a poet to keep love ablaze. If love is true and genuine, it doesn't seek affirmation through verse. So beautifully said, dear Jay
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Date: 9/2/2023 9:06:00 PM
Great write of tender romance, Jay. "My love for you, will forever impart."Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 9/2/2023 1:43:00 PM
Wonderful poem - stems from your heart! No need to make verses dance with poetic images - your love remains for ever! A true joy to read your poem! BW ~ Mala
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Date: 9/2/2023 10:57:00 AM
Your words possess a splendor that is truly remarkable. This poem brings forth a sense of delight and pleasure upon reading it. Wishing you the utmost luck with the contest
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Date: 9/1/2023 11:43:00 AM
This is truly beautiful Jay. "If my stories did not ignite a creative blaze, If my heart did not bleed ink, with each heartfelt line, " Your words are wonderful. A lovely poem to read and enjoy Best wishes from SV
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