Love Makes a Man Do Crazy Things

An angel falls in rain, on slippery rock
Wings matted down by the on pour
A battle to the highest peak, nature the only competitor
A gray gown, clinging to pale skin
Edged ruthlessly by dirt, muddy stains on white
Unforgiving thunder rolls off the mountain
"I'm sorry lord"
Whispers on the wind call quietly
Through the dark, brooding clouds, white light drifts
Sliding silently in and out of vision, like a sacred dance
She almost looses her footing as thunder shakes the rock
Rubble starts to fall and she covers her head
Giant wings come down, and cover the angel
White light surrounding her in an orb
"It's all right"
The angel whispers in her ear
"I'm here"
His arms wrap around her, shielding her from the rain
The sky doesn't clear, but he'll play the game
Darting past the lighting he carries her in his arms
through the gates of heaven, past all its guards
he knelt before his father, and begged and prayed
"Dear Heavenly Father, please let her stay..."
With tears in both their eyes, he cradled her in his arms
she clung to him, her head on his shoulder
the lord looked at them compassion in his eyes
"Go my son, take her and fly"
He looked up at God, love in his eyes
Gathered her in his arms, and away they did fly
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Bordner Avatar
August 18, 2012 at 12:40 PM
Real love - potential tragedy averted by compassion and courage - I love the attitude you endow the weather with - this poem kindles the romantic/heroic in me Jay - I'm grateful that I was led to your work - with respect - J.A.B. %
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May 15, 2010 at 12:18 PM
well done, today i amjust reading whatever, and anything random, glad i red this one. Have your self a nice one, good ending, always,..p.d.
Brown Avatar
July 17, 2009 at 4:29 PM
great poem
Moreno Avatar
July 14, 2009 at 1:58 PM
booboo, congrats on your feature...Raul
Brown Avatar
July 13, 2009 at 3:44 PM
Jese, congratulations on your feature this week. Love, Carol
Tugaff Avatar
July 13, 2009 at 8:45 AM
Congratulations my friend for this featured piece of art. More power and God bless. Ernilando
Adeite Avatar
July 12, 2009 at 10:36 PM
Wow, Great flow of words, this is a very passionate piece. Congrats on your awesome poem being featured this week. You are an incredible poet, please keep writing. Best wishes with your writings. Adeleke
Watkins Avatar
June 8, 2009 at 10:46 AM
Beautifull, so sweet and generous
Christian Avatar
May 29, 2009 at 5:34 AM
aww it is a beautiful poem, so full of devotion, thanks for all your kind comments on my poetry It means a lot, take care my friend God bles from diane
Kroeger Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 8:34 AM
Beautiful! almost made me cry.
Moreno Avatar
April 28, 2009 at 11:54 AM
Nice work, loved the imagery during the rain...Raul
Bird Avatar
April 26, 2009 at 8:58 PM
An interesting write, very much enjoyed! Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work!
Orozco Avatar
April 25, 2009 at 10:55 PM
This is an amazing piece! Well written-darkpoet
Geerts Avatar
April 25, 2009 at 10:11 PM
Beautiful Poem indeed. I really enjoyed reading it... Keep your poetic pen writing...
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