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Love Lull Into Weightlessness

Beautiful picturesque soft glowing light against the darkness, whilst burning shooting star catapult through the sky in its flight. Spinning fine idyllic thread flow, moving. In mine heart, I evoke the narrative wist of our youth. An inexhaustible love; now lost in the waning sedative silence of farewell and exhaustible. Once devoured by his fathomless green eyes, crave the dark blond hair full of spiral curls. Lost to his ebbing wave of silent cries left breathless like flittering glint of pearls. Birds hymn lull mine into weightlessness sleep; whilst echoes always brings you back to keep. 2/22/2020 Poetry Contest: Writing Prompt - Ten Words 2. Love Sponsored by: Dear Heart
thread, heart, silence, hair, beautiful, dark, green, birds, fathomless, breathless

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Date: 3/11/2020 3:37:00 AM
Back with congrats Eve..
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Date: 3/10/2020 6:12:00 PM
Eve, congratulations on you win in my contest with this wonderful poem and thank you for taking part _Constance
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Date: 2/23/2020 8:44:00 PM
Fantastic, love this, Eve, great job -- it should do more than well -- Aloha!~@wk
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Date: 2/23/2020 3:37:00 PM
Excellent evocative sonnet, Eve. I'm sure you'll do well ~ John
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Date: 2/23/2020 12:31:00 AM
Beautifully done Eve.. Great entry in the contest.. Good luck..
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Date: 2/22/2020 8:32:00 PM
Very creative and beautiful! Way to go! Can't wait to read more poems! ---Nathasha T. :)
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Date: 2/22/2020 8:23:00 AM
So very beautiful! Well done my friend.
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Date: 2/22/2020 4:52:00 AM
I love the creation here...the Lull of Love...
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Date: 2/22/2020 4:07:00 AM
Eve, Fathomless beauty, yes. Evoking a timeless dark beauty in the night sky. -Richard
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