Love Lull Into Weightlessness

Beautiful picturesque soft glowing light against the darkness, whilst burning shooting star catapult through the sky in its flight. Spinning fine idyllic thread flow, moving. In mine heart, I evoke the narrative wist of our youth. An inexhaustible love; now lost in the waning sedative silence of farewell and exhaustible. Once devoured by his fathomless green eyes, crave the dark blond hair full of spiral curls. Lost to his ebbing wave of silent cries left breathless like flittering glint of pearls. Birds hymn lull mine into weightlessness sleep; whilst echoes always brings you back to keep. 2/22/2020 Poetry Contest: Writing Prompt - Ten Words 2. Love Sponsored by: Dear Heart
thread, heart, silence, hair, beautiful, dark, green, birds, fathomless, breathless
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Somadas Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 3:37 AM
Back with congrats Eve..
La France Avatar
March 10, 2020 at 6:12 PM
Eve, congratulations on you win in my contest with this wonderful poem and thank you for taking part _Constance
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 8:44 PM
Fantastic, love this, Eve, great job -- it should do more than well -- Aloha!~@wk
Watt Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 3:37 PM
Excellent evocative sonnet, Eve. I'm sure you'll do well ~ John
Somadas Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 12:31 AM
Beautifully done Eve.. Great entry in the contest.. Good luck..
Thalpaguruge Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 8:32 PM
Very creative and beautiful! Way to go! Can't wait to read more poems! ---Nathasha T. :)
Koplin Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 8:23 AM
So very beautiful! Well done my friend.
Michael Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 4:52 AM
I love the creation here...the Lull of Love...
Theraven Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 4:07 AM
Eve, Fathomless beauty, yes. Evoking a timeless dark beauty in the night sky. -Richard
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