Love Loud

Turn on the beats of the heart
And loud love.
The soul longs to hum
The tune of passion.
An upbeat aura of magic
Steering the ride.
An everlasting journey of love
Luring hearts to be on board.
A puff of spring breeze turning mild
Blankets of frozen feelings.
Breathe in the scent of love
Design a divine cocoon.
The music within is warm enough
To bloom.
Uncage fears and worries
Rejoice what of beauty
In can be filled.
Seize times of glee
And set the  soul free.
Turn on the beats of the heart
And loud love.

May 19th,  2018
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Callus Avatar
March 1, 2019 at 7:24 AM
I must have missed this beautiful poem back when posted, Besma. I am captivated by your poetic words and metaphorical use. Well done! ~ Warm regards // paul
Riabi Dziri Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 11:18 AM
I'm really honoured and touched by your generosity, Paul.. I would like to thank you for your precious and sincere feedback.. though I have missed many of your great poems.. I am in exams period at school.. a lot of work that needs time, effort and focus.. A great pleasure to read your beauties.. my deepest regards and blessings.
Lindley Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 9:01 AM
I am so very pleased to have found and enjoyed the immense pleasure of reading this exquisite gem my good friend!! This is truly beautiful and exceptional poetry of top class, in my opinion. EVERY VERSE GOLDEN! A FAV....
Riabi Dziri Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 1:33 PM
The honour and pleasure are mine when reading your sincere, generous and praising feedback! Robert, You are so kind to spill on my humble write so many precious and rewarding a word! I can't thank you enough for your encouraging and uplifting comment! I always appreciate and treasure your visits and feedbacks! Deeply humbled and grateful. Best regards. Stay safe and blessed always.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 1:46 PM
Hello Besma, your poem is beautifully written i enjoyed reading your poem.Have a nice day my friend,
Riabi Dziri Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 3:42 PM
So kind of you Darlene to stop by and appreciate my write.. Thank you so much. Stay safe.
Lamoureux Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 8:30 AM
I enjoyed listening to “ Loud Love” a second time.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 12:29 PM
Thank you so much for the honour Richard! My delight.. Stay blessed.
Lamoureux Avatar
May 30, 2018 at 5:37 PM
Eloquently expressed!
Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 30, 2018 at 6:08 PM
My pleasure. Your feedback is as elating and assuaging as writing a poem! Deeply honoured by your visits. Thank you so much. Stay safe.
Vaso Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 2:06 AM
So beautiful and I love the flow of the poem!
Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 5:41 AM
Thank you for your visit and appreciative feedback. Deeply humbled and elated. Stay blessed.
One Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 4:24 PM
This is a beautiful poem Besma..
Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 2:49 AM
Deeply humbled Silent One.. Thank you so much for your kind feedback. Stay blessed.
Ashley Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 3:25 PM
How beautiful is your mind to conjure such magnificent poetry, dear Besma. Every line is simply so poetic and fills my mind with contemplative ecstasy.. 'Turn on the beats of the heart and loud love' - so rejoiceful.. and 'A puff a spring breeze turning mild blankets of frozen feelings' - such bliss.. and 'Design a divine cocoon. The music within is warm enough to bloom' - just breathtaking! Your poetry thrills me, my lovely friend, Besma, and so does your wondrous heart. Warmest wishes and love always.. ~Susan
Ashley Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 4:34 PM
The glorious ink you spill, dear Besma, is above and beyond the heavenly blue..
Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 4:22 PM
I can't thank you enough dear Susan for your kind and uplifting words.. Your visit is a great delight and honour.. I'm striving to spill writes that meet ardent readers aspirations let alone a refined adept poetess like you dear Susan.. I'm deeply humbled dear. Stay safe and blessed as always.
Ashley Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 3:43 PM
Also, I must fav this exquisite poem!
Trifiatis Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 3:09 AM
Apotheosis of love and poetic rapture dear, Besma!
Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 1:09 PM
I'm deeply honoured and elated by your praising and uplifting feedback dear Demetrios. Thank you so much for the positive vibes. Stay safe always.
Williams Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 7:01 PM
Oh yes, I'll be in that, to turn on the beat of the heart and loud love. A magical write dearest Besma, saying it like only you can. Delightful and a fave....Maria hugs
Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 2:50 AM
You are the one dear Maria, you have an aura of love spreading its beauty wherever you shine and set your soul on my humble write.. you are showering upon my words and me genuine love and generous interest.. Bunches of love and thanks dear Maria, shine and stay blessed. Your feedback is always a delight.
Pandit Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 6:20 AM
Inspirational and uplifting..your words awaken the mind ..well written poem Besma.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 6:38 AM
My pleasure dear Vijay! I'm deeply humbled by your generous appreciative words.. Thank you so much dear, stay safe always.
Cunningham Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 10:50 PM
Indeed Besma, isn't love all you need. Lovely verse. Tom.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 5:42 AM
Deeply humbled and honoured by your visit Tom. Thank you so much for your appreciative feedback. Stay blessed.
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