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Turn on the beats of the heart And loud love. The soul longs to hum The tune of passion. An upbeat aura of magic Steering the ride. An everlasting journey of love Luring hearts to be on board. A puff of spring breeze turning mild Blankets of frozen feelings. Breathe in the scent of love Design a divine cocoon. The music within is warm enough To bloom. Uncage fears and worries Rejoice what of beauty In can be filled. Seize times of glee And set the  soul free. Turn on the beats of the heart And loud love. May 19th,  2018

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Date: 3/1/2019 7:24:00 AM
I must have missed this beautiful poem back when posted, Besma. I am captivated by your poetic words and metaphorical use. Well done! ~ Warm regards // paul
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Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 3/3/2019 11:18:00 AM
I'm really honoured and touched by your generosity, Paul.. I would like to thank you for your precious and sincere feedback.. though I have missed many of your great poems.. I am in exams period at school.. a lot of work that needs time, effort and focus.. A great pleasure to read your beauties.. my deepest regards and blessings.
Date: 7/9/2018 9:01:00 AM
I am so very pleased to have found and enjoyed the immense pleasure of reading this exquisite gem my good friend!! This is truly beautiful and exceptional poetry of top class, in my opinion. EVERY VERSE GOLDEN! A FAV....
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Date: 7/10/2018 1:33:00 PM
The honour and pleasure are mine when reading your sincere, generous and praising feedback! Robert, You are so kind to spill on my humble write so many precious and rewarding a word! I can't thank you enough for your encouraging and uplifting comment! I always appreciate and treasure your visits and feedbacks! Deeply humbled and grateful. Best regards. Stay safe and blessed always.
Date: 6/6/2018 1:46:00 PM
Hello Besma, your poem is beautifully written i enjoyed reading your poem.Have a nice day my friend,
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Date: 6/6/2018 3:42:00 PM
So kind of you Darlene to stop by and appreciate my write.. Thank you so much. Stay safe.
Date: 6/4/2018 8:30:00 AM
I enjoyed listening to “ Loud Love” a second time.
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Date: 6/4/2018 12:29:00 PM
Thank you so much for the honour Richard! My delight.. Stay blessed.
Date: 5/30/2018 5:37:00 PM
Eloquently expressed!
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Date: 5/30/2018 6:08:00 PM
My pleasure. Your feedback is as elating and assuaging as writing a poem! Deeply honoured by your visits. Thank you so much. Stay safe.
Date: 5/29/2018 2:06:00 AM
So beautiful and I love the flow of the poem!
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Date: 5/29/2018 5:41:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and appreciative feedback. Deeply humbled and elated. Stay blessed.
Date: 5/23/2018 4:24:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem Besma..
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Date: 5/24/2018 2:49:00 AM
Deeply humbled Silent One.. Thank you so much for your kind feedback. Stay blessed.
Date: 5/22/2018 3:25:00 PM
How beautiful is your mind to conjure such magnificent poetry, dear Besma. Every line is simply so poetic and fills my mind with contemplative ecstasy.. 'Turn on the beats of the heart and loud love' - so rejoiceful.. and 'A puff a spring breeze turning mild blankets of frozen feelings' - such bliss.. and 'Design a divine cocoon. The music within is warm enough to bloom' - just breathtaking! Your poetry thrills me, my lovely friend, Besma, and so does your wondrous heart. Warmest wishes and love always.. ~Susan
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Susan Ashley
Date: 5/22/2018 4:34:00 PM
The glorious ink you spill, dear Besma, is above and beyond the heavenly blue..
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Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/22/2018 4:22:00 PM
I can't thank you enough dear Susan for your kind and uplifting words.. Your visit is a great delight and honour.. I'm striving to spill writes that meet ardent readers aspirations let alone a refined adept poetess like you dear Susan.. I'm deeply humbled dear. Stay safe and blessed as always.
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Susan Ashley
Date: 5/22/2018 3:43:00 PM
Also, I must fav this exquisite poem!
Date: 5/21/2018 3:09:00 AM
Apotheosis of love and poetic rapture dear, Besma!
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Date: 5/21/2018 1:09:00 PM
I'm deeply honoured and elated by your praising and uplifting feedback dear Demetrios. Thank you so much for the positive vibes. Stay safe always.
Date: 5/20/2018 7:01:00 PM
Oh yes, I'll be in that, to turn on the beat of the heart and loud love. A magical write dearest Besma, saying it like only you can. Delightful and a fave....Maria hugs
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Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/21/2018 2:50:00 AM
You are the one dear Maria, you have an aura of love spreading its beauty wherever you shine and set your soul on my humble write.. you are showering upon my words and me genuine love and generous interest.. Bunches of love and thanks dear Maria, shine and stay blessed. Your feedback is always a delight.
Date: 5/20/2018 6:20:00 AM
Inspirational and uplifting..your words awaken the mind ..well written poem Besma.
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Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/20/2018 6:38:00 AM
My pleasure dear Vijay! I'm deeply humbled by your generous appreciative words.. Thank you so much dear, stay safe always.
Date: 5/19/2018 10:50:00 PM
Indeed Besma, isn't love all you need. Lovely verse. Tom.
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Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/20/2018 5:42:00 AM
Deeply humbled and honoured by your visit Tom. Thank you so much for your appreciative feedback. Stay blessed.

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