Dr. Upma A. Sharma Poet Rispetto

Love Lost

Love lost



Lights all over yet darkest sight, 
Betrayal is such a worst plight,
Flaring an emotional flow,
Life oscillates on stormy tide,
Rationale sways passion aside,
Lost respect for life and the glow,
Lights all over yet darkest sight,
Betrayal is such a worst plight,

Lost is the beat lost is the zeal,
Hurt isn't ever going to heal,
Flaring an emotional flow,
Lost respect for life and the glow,
Light all over yet darkest sight,
Betrayal is such a worst plight !




Written October 23rd, 2014
For Dr. Ram's contest 'Sonnetina rispetto'

Awarded 2nd place

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Maurice Yvonne November 7, 2014 at 7:28 PM Dr. Upma I was so happy to see your name so high on the list. Congratulations on your fine win.

Andrea Dietrich November 6, 2014 at 10:13 PM big congrats for your super win, Dr. Upma.

Connie Marcum Wong November 6, 2014 at 12:13 PM I am happy this poem took top honors Dr. Upma. It is one of the best I have read in this contest! I loved it! Kudos my friend!

Jan Allison November 6, 2014 at 12:11 PM excellent write on lost love and betrayal- many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Brenda Meier-Hans November 6, 2014 at 10:51 AM I am really happy that this although painful yet so well written poem placed so well. Congratulations on your win Dr. Sharma. I hope this win brings you a smile.

Barbara Gorelick November 6, 2014 at 10:35 AM Congrats dear Dr. A big win for you and Im so happy for you. BG

Dr.Ram Mehta November 6, 2014 at 4:05 AM Dr. Upma, Thanks for the entry and congrats on the win,

Paul Callus October 26, 2014 at 4:30 AM Hi Upma! Out of 'rispetto' for you I shall be honest....I enjoyed this poem which speaks of betrayal and lost love...it seems to be so common nowadays! a top rating for you! // paul Paul Callus November 8, 2014 at 9:59 AM Congratulations on a much deserved win, Upma!!

Arthur Vaso October 26, 2014 at 12:46 AM I have lost more loves than Casanova on Viagra, well not really, but that just sounded so funny at the moment! Seriously anyone who knows betrayal understands this poem very well!

Demetrios Trifiatis October 25, 2014 at 2:15 AM This is like a pearl, Dr Upma, that although the causes that produce it are so painful the product is beautiful! A really wonderful writing! A seven without hesitation! Good luck on the contest!

Phyllis Babcock October 23, 2014 at 4:23 PM Well written on lost love. Life does seem to lose it's glow when that happens. Nice Rispetto. One form I have not tried. Good luck in the contest. love phyl