Love Lost

You look around at the earth and see where
the sea once was, the deserts, the low lands,
the water marks on the mountains, and here
is a shell in a cave, tens of thousands
of feet in the air. There in the ocean
is a city where once lives were cherished.
Road leads into a bay, once a portion
of the main, now to memories ravished
of all their knowledge. Was there no one there
to mark passing, so gradual and so
imperceptible that only obscure
reminders, lost in time, a change so slow
no one noticed or change so dramatic
they all were left blinded and traumatic
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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June 13, 2010 at 8:52 AM
Congratulations on being featured. Great job! Joseph
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June 12, 2010 at 11:20 AM
Hey! Congrats on having you wonderful poem being featured this week, keep your pens flowing with passion. You are such a great writer
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June 10, 2010 at 9:04 AM
Powerful write here Ahellas!! You've written our history in these poignant lines and here we are on a road of discovery about our past. Were we here then? Who knows ... smile ... great writing here and a very well-deserved selection to be featured this week at the Soup. Congratulations!!
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June 9, 2010 at 11:52 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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June 8, 2010 at 3:31 PM
congrats on the feature....
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June 7, 2010 at 8:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poetry this week Ahellas. Love, Carol
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June 6, 2010 at 6:06 PM
Much for the reader to ponder about. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen
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